H50 fic: That Was Then

[haldoor_honey]

Title: That Was Then
Pairing/Characters: Past Steve/Chin, current Steve/Danny
Genre: Angst, first time
Word Count: 3716
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: No spoilers for the show; uneasy first time sex, teenage!Steve.
Disclaimer: I have no rights or ownership; I make no money.
Beta: Thanks, once again, to my wonderful beta, siluria *smooches*.
Summary:

Comments

[antivol]

I loved that chapter! It was hot, and sweet. Maybe I shouldn't find this hot as Steve here is so young... but well, it's Steve, and Chin, it's fanfiction, so I'll forget reality for a while!! Thanks for sharing this. (and, in Danny's place, I think I'd be jealous anyway, whatever Chin says...)

[haldoor]

Thank you! I know, I felt a little bad at the whole deal with him being so young, but the age of consent is 16 in Hawaii, I believe, and Chin really isn't that much older (about 21) so it's not really as bad as it might be! Plus, it is fiction, as you so rightly say! You're welcome regarding the sharing - I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I'd be jealous too! ;-)

[kitmerlot1213]

"You're not exactly 'people'. I told him I don't mind if he tells you about us, Danny." Good for Chin for realizing that while Danny doesn't need the gory details, there wasn't any harm in talking about past relationships.

And Danny will always have some jealousy towards Chin, just like Steve probably has some jealousy regarding Rachel because she was once important to Danny.

Danny studied Chin's eyes and Chin wondered what he saw; whether he realized he really did have Steve as completely as Chin knew he did. This was just lovely because I don't think Danny does realize just how smitten Steve is with him.

Lovely work on this :)

[haldoor]

Yeah, talking about past relationships is definitely not always a bad thing, and they probably needed to clarify some things, so it was a good thing here.

Yes, agreed; Danny is bound to have some jealousy, just as Steve will, as you so rightly point out.

And thanks too for letting me know about that line! I think you're right about Danny not realising, and I'm so pleased that worked!

Thanks again; I'm so glad you liked this so much! And thanks for taking time to give such lovely feedback! ;-)

[haldoor]

Thanks you so much for your kind words! I agree wholeheartedly about the feelings still lasting (Steve would be so hard to get past, you're right, especially with still seeing him so much), and agreed on the jealousy front too!

Yes, I am going to write more, because I feel there are ore revelations in store. I haven't started it yet, but I do think the next one will be from Steve's POV and will mention more of the relationship between him and Chin. I won't promise speed, or whether there will be more beyond that, but it's entirely possible! Thanks for the interest; it's really encouraging! ;-)

[finduilas_clln]

Great chapter! Nice to see some of the backstory between Chin and Steve.

[haldoor]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed; I appreciate you taking time to comment too! ;-)

[ambard10]

nice, i like the relation between Steve, Chin y Danny, both love steve but their way and they protect him

[haldoor]

Thanks so much; I'm so pleased you liked this. ;-)