Title: That Was Then
Pairing/Characters: Past Steve/Chin, current Steve/Danny
Genre: Angst, first time
Word Count: 3716
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: No spoilers for the show; uneasy first time sex, teenage!Steve.
Disclaimer: I have no rights or ownership; I make no money.
Beta: Thanks, once again, to my wonderful beta,
siluria *smooches*.
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And Danny will always have some jealousy towards Chin, just like Steve probably has some jealousy regarding Rachel because she was once important to Danny.
Danny studied Chin's eyes and Chin wondered what he saw; whether he realized he really did have Steve as completely as Chin knew he did. This was just lovely because I don't think Danny does realize just how smitten Steve is with him.
Lovely work on this :)
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Yes, agreed; Danny is bound to have some jealousy, just as Steve will, as you so rightly point out.
And thanks too for letting me know about that line! I think you're right about Danny not realising, and I'm so pleased that worked!
Thanks again; I'm so glad you liked this so much! And thanks for taking time to give such lovely feedback! ;-)
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Yes, I am going to write more, because I feel there are ore revelations in store. I haven't started it yet, but I do think the next one will be from Steve's POV and will mention more of the relationship between him and Chin. I won't promise speed, or whether there will be more beyond that, but it's entirely possible! Thanks for the interest; it's really encouraging! ;-)
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