H50 fic: Unfinished Business

[haldoor_honey]

Title: Unfinished Business
Pairing/Characters: Steve/Danny, mentions of Steve/Chin and Chin/Malia
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 3512
Rating: PG-13
Warnings/Spoilers: No spoilers for the show apart from a certain marriage and a kidnapping mentioned very briefly. If you don't know what I'm talking about and you'd rather not know, then don't read! Nothing

Comments

[huntress69]

I was so excited to see another chapter of this and I love your characterizations. Chin so calm and cool, Danny jealous, and Steve, oh poor Steve, he's such an emotional mess and I love him like that, makes him more human. Thanks for sharing this and always looking forward to your fics.

[haldoor_honey]

Thanks so much for your kind comments! I love Steve as a bit insecure emotionally - it seems to me he'd have every reason to be - and you're so right about it making him more human. Thanks for reading! I hope to have the next one ready before too much longer. ;-)

[kitmerlot1213]

I love Steve, but man I do not envy Danny's having to deal with the emotional minefield that is Steve's emotions.

And while Danny may not have Chin as a romantic threat, he still has to deal with Steve's trusting Chin more. I can understand Danny's being thrown that Steve's okay with discussing his and Danny's relationship with Chin but Steve refuses to discuss anything about Chin to Danny. I'm not suggesting that he needs to start spilling dark secrets but may be talk a little more.

[haldoor]

Yeah, I think Steve has a lot of issues when it comes to love. Danny will have to be very patient!

And you are quite right on that score. Somehow, I don't think Danny's going to let Steve keep things that way for long; but now Steve realises that Danny's not just going to run away the second he finds 'someone better' (ie a woman who interests him), Steve may just open up more. We can but hope, anyway!

And thank you for reading and commenting! ;-)

[siluria]

I be a constant?? Awwwww xxxx

[haldoor]

You definitely are! ;-)