Lost fic: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Eleven - Rise

May 31, 2010 20:39

Title: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part 11: Rise

OT3: Jack/Sawyer/Sayid

Rating: NC-17 for sex.

Word Count: 5303 this part

Beta: siluria gave it her magic touch. Thanks again, love; you really are a life-saver!

Disclaimer: I don't own Lost, nor do I make any money from my wild imaginings.

Warnings: Nothing nearly as bad as what’s already happened ( Read more... )

phoenix, threesome, lost: jack/sawyer/sayid, fps, lost fic

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adahleah May 31 2010, 15:10:15 UTC
wow, amazing ending to a great story. There was so much love between the three of them, they would have never be completely satisfied with a relationship between the two of them and one person on the outside.

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haldoor_honey June 1 2010, 05:46:08 UTC
Thank you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! Yes, I doubt it would have worked with one left alone and the others paired off. Hopefully, now they can attempt to be happy. Thanks again for your continued support! ;-)

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jaydblu June 1 2010, 15:17:24 UTC
Very nice! It's great that after all the drama and screwed up feelings that the three of them are able to work towards their happy (and hot) ending!

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haldoor June 2 2010, 10:51:18 UTC
Thank you, my love! I'm glad you think this was a fitting way to close here. ;-)

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zelda_zee June 2 2010, 20:00:52 UTC
Yay, you finished! What an accomplishment! And I finally got caught up.

A happy, porny, poly ending is always my favorite way to go. These three just are better in a threesome than in any separate pairing, it's a fact. I'm glad you took it there, after everything they've been through they deserve to have it all. I liked how it wasn't all perfect though - you clearly showed that there would still be challenges and tough times.

Nice job!

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haldoor_honey June 3 2010, 08:10:19 UTC
Thanks! It was quite the accomplishment in the end, though it was all written for quite some months. Getting it beta'd proved to take a while longer than expected, but I finally got there!

Yeah, it was pretty much the only way to end it for these guys! And I agree, much as I love the pairings, my favourite is definitely the OT3! Thanks for the great comment too - I like things to finsih on 'hope' rather than out-and-out happiness, as you know, so I'm glad it worked!

Love your icon, btw! ;-)

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alemyrddin June 3 2010, 08:57:38 UTC
mmmmm.... *happy sigh*
This was deliciously hot and so emotionally satisfying.

Thanks for this, I loved this series. And the idea of a working threesome for the three of them is something special.

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haldoor June 6 2010, 06:21:11 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it. I think this is the only true answer for the three of them in this story. Anything else just wouldn't be fair. I'm so glad you think I made it work out well, anyway! Thanks again! *hugs*

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