Five Acts

[haldoor_honey]

I foolishly signed up to do toestastegood's Five Acts comment fic fun. She's going to do a master list once everyone's getting underway, so I'll link you there in case you're interested in more than my post

Comments

Re: Star Trek, Chekov/McCoy, first times - PG-13

[haldoor]

OH! That is gorgeous! Thanks so much, my dear! That is absolutely exactly right. Beautiful! ;-)

Re: Star Trek, Chekov/McCoy, first times - PG-13

[lozateazer]

Awww, that's lovely!

Re: Star Trek, Chekov/McCoy, first times - PG-13

[kitty_trio]

Mmmmmm, that is beautiful! I love your acknowledgment of Chekov not being the 'kid' everyone *koffs* McCoy *g* thinks him. Wonderfully done.

Kevin/Scotty, Robert POV, voyuerism, R - part one

[gemjam]

When Robert goes back to the office to pick up a file he needs to look over before the next day, it’s late and he doesn’t expect anyone to still be there. He hears voices though, low and indistinct, and notices the door to Kevin’s office is ajar. He moves closer, pushing the door open slightly further, but he only sees Kevin, sitting in his desk chair, his eyes closed and a strained look on his face. Robert figures he must have been on the phone and is about to announce his presence when he hears something like a giggle that definitely doesn’t come from Kevin and he suddenly figures out what’s going on

Kevin/Scotty, Robert POV, voyuerism, R - part two

[gemjam]

They move together, a writhing, pumping mass, like some kind of single entity with one mind and one goal. They speed up, the air filled with breathless moans and groans and exhalations. Kevin buries his face in the crook of Scotty’s neck as Scotty holds him close, his legs wrapping tightly around Kevin’s back, and Robert sees such familiarity in the move, the way that they support one another. He presses his lips tightly together as he watches them strain, watches them give it all up to each other in abandon like they’ve nothing to hide. They look open and vulnerable and Robert feels out of place. He’s watching more than sex. He’s watching intimacy, private emotions and a physical expression of everything these two feel for each other

Re: Kevin/Scotty, Robert POV, voyuerism, R - part two

[haldoor]

OMG! You wrote me Kevin/Scotty! Gem! Gem! Gem! You are altogether too awesome! And Robert watching? Couldn't have been a better choice! I love it so much! Thank you! ♥

Re: Kevin/Scotty, Robert POV, voyuerism, R - part two

[gemjam]

I love Kevin and Scotty, but I'm only a very casual viewer of the show, so I just hope no one was woefully out of character. I'm glad that you enjoyed it, either way. Thank you very much :)

the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

the hardest button to button
firefly, mal/simon; 614; r

Crew ain't stupid, that's for sure. There's things they know, and things they know but know better'n to say out loud.

For example, they know that Mal's been in love with one Inara Serra for longer than counting's worth. And they know that when the captain gets in one of his moods it's best to stay out of the way and keep your mouth shut, if you have a care for what's good for you. What they may not know is that when he hollers at Simon to get that gorram equipment out of his cargo bay and stocked in the infirmary, lest he want it floating in the black, what he's really doing is releasing some of that pent-up sexual tension he's usually so apt to hold onto.

And Simon, bright as he is, hasn't quite figured that out yet either, despite the vivid memory of Mal's hot tongue driving him to orgasm two nights prior.

"Captain Reynolds," Simon fumes following him down the causeway, "If you don't mind. I'm still taking inventory

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[gigglemonster]

Ahahah OMG THIS IS AMAZING
First of all hoooooot wow hot
Second of all, I love that you seem to just slip into these different voices when you write. Your wording and tone, it just feels like this show. It's wonderful.
<3

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

Yay! I succeeded in bringing the hot! [I was worried.] I think I've only ever written firefly twice before? And they were both BSG crossovers? So it's relatively new territory for me. Thank you!

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[haldoor]

Oh yes! This definitely hits some kinks! And oh boy you do know how to get into the voices! Brilliant! Thank you so much! ;-)

Lost, Jack/Boone + Sawyer, rimming + voyeurism, NC17

[janie_tangerine]

This is actually a first time for me since I've never written rimming in my whole freaking life so I hope it's decent? ;)

Now this? This wasn’t really anything Sawyer had been planning to witness.

Ever.

And the fun thing is that no one would believe him if he told them that he really,really had just been taking a fucking goddamn walk. He hadn’t been following anyone and for once he just wanted to spend some fucking time with himself and no one else bothering him around the beach.

And it’s just his luck that he had to hear them. Well, fine, he could have just gone and ignored the sounds, but when you hear people moaning in the jungle like they were acting in some particularly low-profile porn, you just… can’t ignore that, not when your name is James Sawyer Ford anyway

Re: Lost, Jack/Boone + Sawyer, rimming + voyeurism, NC17

[haldoor]

AWESOME!!! Oh, don't worry, you did just fine! Jack/Boone, as you know, is like my second fave pairing these days, so perfect! And Sawyer watching? Oh yes! Absolutely spot on! Thank you so freakin' much, as Sawyer might have said there! Ha! Beautiful! ;-)

Re: Lost, Jack/Boone + Sawyer, rimming + voyeurism, NC17

[gottalovev]

LOL! well you did great, that was awesome. I particularly love your Sawyer here, just totally astonished! lol!

Re: Lost, Jack/Boone + Sawyer, rimming + voyeurism, NC17

[janie_tangerine]

Heee, thank you! This meme, srsly. I ended up writing rimming TWICE, what. And ha, yeah, poor Sawyer. I always make him the voyeur, lolol. Much glad you liked it!!!

True Blood : Eric/Sam : Touching

[takhallus]

Eric knew that the Shifter could sense him, not that he cared. He found it amusing how Sam glanced at reflective surfaces trying to spot the intruder. He watched Sam's hand drift towards a concealed gun beneath the counter and rolled his eyes

Re: True Blood : Eric/Sam : Touching

[haldoor]

Thank you! This is totally awesome! Not only have you hit the kink beautifully, but the mouth-licking helped out with another one - mmm. Love the way Eric turns Sam on and walks away too - that sounds about right for him! ;-)