Comments | haldoor_honey: Lost fic: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Nine

haldoor_honey

Lost fic: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part Nine - Babylon

Jan 22, 2010 23:51

Title: By the Time I Get to Phoenix, Part 9: Babylon

Pairing: Jack/Sayid

Rating: NC-17 for descriptions of violence and semi-consensual sexual activity.

Word Count: 6243 this part

Beta: gregoria44 is back in the beta saddle, for which I'm very grateful.

Disclaimer: I don't own Lost, nor do I make any money from my wild imaginings.

Warnings: As above ( Read more... )

phoenix, fps, lost fic, lost: jack/sayid

Comments 8

jaydblu January 22 2010, 20:43:36 UTC

oh...that ended at the wrong part. I mean, it wasn't the wrong part, but I wanted more.

Great as always. I'm looking forward to the rest. :)

haldoor_honey January 24 2010, 04:47:03 UTC

I know what you mean! Thanks, as ever for your kind comments. The rest will hopefully not be so long in coming! ;-)

sevedra January 24 2010, 00:09:43 UTC

WOW. That was very powerful. Sayid's guilt and torment are very realistic and Jack's undestanding is very in-character. I love where you have gone with this. And I am sure I see a happy threesome in the future!

Do you know how many more chapters there are of this?

haldoor_honey January 24 2010, 04:49:23 UTC

Thank you! Glad you think it seems to be in character, even if it is not the most pleasant reading all the time. I do hope things turn out as you'd like!

Yes, there are two more chapters only - it's all written and just needs a bit of extra work and a beta-read, then I will try and get them posted too.

adahleah January 24 2010, 13:24:54 UTC

this is such a heart wrenching story. with sayid's therapy and sawyer's rehab and jack's love and understanding they can all make this work.
i can't believe there are only two chapters left...

haldoor_honey January 24 2010, 21:20:15 UTC

It's certainly not an easy read - thanks so much for sticking with it and commenting! Yes, the two chapters will hopefully resolve everything nicely, although I still need to do a little work on them to iron out a couple of things. I'll post them as soon as I can! Thanks again. ;-)

alemyrddin June 3 2010, 08:29:51 UTC

Just catching up now, and it's still awesome!
I love the idea of a menage-a-trois... I hope it works out, I want a happy ending!
*off to the next part*

haldoor June 6 2010, 06:17:21 UTC

Thanks, love! So glad you made it back here! *hugs*