Five Acts

[haldoor_honey]

I foolishly signed up to do toestastegood's Five Acts comment fic fun. She's going to do a master list once everyone's getting underway, so I'll link you there in case you're interested in more than my post

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the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

the hardest button to button
firefly, mal/simon; 614; r

Crew ain't stupid, that's for sure. There's things they know, and things they know but know better'n to say out loud.

For example, they know that Mal's been in love with one Inara Serra for longer than counting's worth. And they know that when the captain gets in one of his moods it's best to stay out of the way and keep your mouth shut, if you have a care for what's good for you. What they may not know is that when he hollers at Simon to get that gorram equipment out of his cargo bay and stocked in the infirmary, lest he want it floating in the black, what he's really doing is releasing some of that pent-up sexual tension he's usually so apt to hold onto.

And Simon, bright as he is, hasn't quite figured that out yet either, despite the vivid memory of Mal's hot tongue driving him to orgasm two nights prior.

"Captain Reynolds," Simon fumes following him down the causeway, "If you don't mind. I'm still taking inventory

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[gigglemonster]

Ahahah OMG THIS IS AMAZING
First of all hoooooot wow hot
Second of all, I love that you seem to just slip into these different voices when you write. Your wording and tone, it just feels like this show. It's wonderful.
<3

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

Yay! I succeeded in bringing the hot! [I was worried.] I think I've only ever written firefly twice before? And they were both BSG crossovers? So it's relatively new territory for me. Thank you!

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[haldoor]

Oh yes! This definitely hits some kinks! And oh boy you do know how to get into the voices! Brilliant! Thank you so much! ;-)

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

I'm so glad. I was actually pretty nervous about doing this, my first time writing a couple of the things above, haha. Not to mention the pairing. ;) Glad you enjoyed!

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[gottalovev]

that's totally awesome! I don't read Firefly much, but damn you sold this to me. Hot! and well the ending is too precious ;)

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

Thank you! ♥!

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[sarisia]

This was wonderful. Spot on voices and spot on hotness. Unf, baby.

Re: the hardest button to button; firefly, mal/simon; rimming, fighting/anger, voyeurism; r

[crickets]

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Glad you liked it!