Comments | halcyon_morn: Mr. Grumpy Goes To The Beach

halcyon_morn

Mr. Grumpy Goes To The Beach

Dec 30, 2007 00:26

My fic for ranalore for the Nuna Fanworks Fic Exchange. Changmin decides to take a grumpy day.

Mr. Grumpy Goes To The Beach
OT5

( Changmin thinks that Okinawa is just like every other island paradise he's ever been to: not all it's cracked up to be. )

rating: no adult content, character: junsu, character: changmin, character: yunho, !fic, character: yoochun, character: jaejoong, fandom: dbsk

Comments 38

ranalore December 30 2007, 06:00:39 UTC

*DIES LAUGHING* I, personally, adore beaches and warm weather, but not hot weather, and I so sympathized with Changmin complaining about the heat in the "making of" video. And I adore the idea of Grumpy Days, not least because they would explain some of Changmin's changes in behavior on certain days. Also, Jaehomin plotting to give Yoosu an ocean bath for being incorrigible brats? WINS EVERYTHING.

Thank you so, so much. This is snarky and funny and stealthily heartwarming, and I couldn't have asked for anything more suited to my tastes.

halcyon_morn December 30 2007, 06:16:44 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much for organizing this exchange-I had a lot of fun writing this and I can't wait to read the other fics!

milena_1980 December 30 2007, 06:50:19 UTC

This is absolutely adorable. I love it ;D

halcyon_morn December 30 2007, 16:32:14 UTC

Thank you! :D

orionsroad December 30 2007, 07:40:14 UTC

iujsdoifws. Cracked out YooSu for the win, and Grumpy Min is also for the win. Just perfect. And lmao, I love the title too. :D

halcyon_morn December 30 2007, 16:34:50 UTC

Thanks! True or false: there should be a series of children's books featuring 'Min as Mr. Grumpy? Because that would make my life.

kratynoi December 30 2007, 08:51:19 UTC

Too cuute~! Changmin, I can totally relate, sometimes I need to take a Grumpy Day too. His POV was too fun to read. ^^ At least he didn't stay in Grumpy-Night-mode too long...not with Jaejoong and Yunho around at least. :D OT5 ftw~!
So much love for this fic. ^^

halcyon_morn December 30 2007, 16:35:56 UTC

How could he stay grumpy with the other four around? :D Glad you liked it!

audient December 30 2007, 09:35:34 UTC

....... dskjahflksjfhlsdkj this is so, so sweet and that was so, so... what I thought ChangMin would be like, it hurts. I love the humor. I love ChangMin (oh, I do). I love YooSu. I love this. I'd say I love you too but I might scare you away, so-

:D♥!

halcyon_morn December 30 2007, 16:37:47 UTC

Oh, I don't scare that easily. XD But thank you-in my mind, Min is clearly long-suffering and Yoosu are clearly psychotic balcony-scalers, so I'm glad someone else digs those characterizations.