Entrapment

May 19, 2009 22:14

For meitachi on her birthday. And by "on her birthday," I mean "approximately nine months late." I, however, prefer to think of it as three months early. :D ( Read more... )

!fic, rating: explicit content, fandom: super junior, character: donghae, character: kibum

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halcyon_morn May 20 2009, 03:30:22 UTC
Spot reserved for meitachi, with my apologies. orz

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meiface May 20 2009, 11:01:19 UTC
aklsjdfasldk READING IN THE HOUR I HAVE BEFORE I HAVE TO RUN FOR MY PLANE THE AIRPORT T_T ♥ OH CHRIS

CRYING OH CHRIS WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING. COCKY!KIBUM BREAKING HEARTS JUST BECAUSE HE CAN. SEXY SEXY CONFIDENT DONGHAE ALSDK TOP 3L WHAT THE FUCK AMAZING. GIVE ME A MOMENT. I need to recover. alksdjf!

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meiface May 20 2009, 11:21:53 UTC
Seriously, seriously, have I mentioned I love you? akjfasklj write forever, I don't care how long it takes, you are king of everything ever. ♥! But especially porn.

I love, love your characterization of Kibum, being the total bastard that he is, but he just likes doing things other people can't get away with. So smug! So arrogant! And yet so hot~

It is only when the older man pulls his little sports coupe into the parking lot of a place called The Adonis that Kibum remembers the other thing he'd had a reputation for in high school: being a fucking fairy.

This made me LOL because asldkjfalskd hahaha Yesung. Freaky fairy? He is so maligned. (But he revels in it, so I guess it's not that bad.)

BUT THEN DONGHAE HAPPENED CHRIS. DONGHAE HOW I LOVE HIM. Just. Just. Confident and easy and hot ansdkfaskdj and older than Kibum and pwning him all the way from strip club to law school (LOL @ Torts professor) and alksdjfaskjdkjfasl ( ... )

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halcyon_morn May 20 2009, 20:12:14 UTC
MEI YOU WILL NOT READ THIS BECAUSE YOU ARE IN CHINA BUT ILU LONG TIEMZ! ♥

I wish I could give you my Kibum and Donghae and you could participate in their law school/strip club games. I'll...work on it while you're gone, ok? :Db

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xiahtic May 20 2009, 04:09:46 UTC
oh my god /runs to read

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xiahtic May 20 2009, 04:23:02 UTC
KSHDFKLAJSDHGKJADHGK;JAHSF;JKSHFLSJDFKLSJADFKLASJDFKL;JSADL;KFASL;DKFKDJFGHKDJFHGK;ADJGH

YOU FANBOY ME?! I THINK I FANGIRL YOU HARDER, OKAY. I JUST REALLY DO.

sdljfk seriously ahh i can't even, HOW ARE YOU NOT DESCRIPTIVE ugh whatever you totally are. i love the way you write, idek. it's.. like, it's descriptive but not overly so and real and sexy and and SO FUCKING PERFECT. :((( even un-edited dkfhjkh ♥♥♥

AND I LOVE YOUR DONGHAE. I LOVE HIM. :(

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halcyon_morn May 20 2009, 05:11:33 UTC
SLDKFJHSDKLJF SOBS this fic is so manic-depressive and messed up and asdfkjhasdf thank you for liking it anyway! ;~; ♥

*mutual fan...kids 4 life!!!1*

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umberela May 20 2009, 04:37:42 UTC
I. You. Just. Wow

...wow

HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME IDGI DDDDDD: this is amazing sobs. I love the way you characterized (is this a word? :|) kibum and donghae, like if they grew up in this situation i can see them turning out like this. Only not quite. Maybe.

...

IDK WHAT I AM SAYING. YOU HAVE MELTED MY BRAIN. IT IS LEAKING OUT OF MY EARS AND STAINING THE CARPET.

TO PARAPHRASE:
umberela: i love Chris
umberela: he deserves
umberela: idk
umberela: a monument isn't good enough
umberela: a country named after him
crazychickencow: pornsylvania.

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halcyon_morn May 20 2009, 05:14:18 UTC
*DIES* Pornsylvania. PORNSYLVANIA. FUCK NOW I WANT A COUNTRY NAMED PORNSYLVANIA. D: Why must you make me dream so big?

Seriously, though, thank you so much. I'm glad you found it semi-believable and liked it (although I'm sorry it's caused you brain-leakage) and I'm kind of freaked out in a good way that people, like, name countries after me without my knowing it. ♥

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scylladakylla May 20 2009, 05:45:44 UTC
I-GUH. I think my brain just melted and leaked out of my ears. ♥ Have to say, Chris, no one does porn quite like you. XD

Your Kibum is hot and cocky and full of himself and a total asshole and did I mention hot? It was amazing seeing Donghae put him in his place. ♥ And oh God, the Yehwook. And Donghae's lapdance. Just... guhhhh. ♥

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halcyon_morn May 20 2009, 20:13:58 UTC
I think my brain just melted and leaked out of my ears.

Apparently that is a symptom of this fic? D: *eyes the comment above*

But I am glad you liked my porn despite my failure to edit. Speaking of which, I should get on that and post this to miracle______...

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dapdaphae May 20 2009, 05:49:17 UTC
dies, omg. i have no words alskdjaldkja my face is just very 8DD!!! right now. i love your kibum and oh donghae.

ugh, dubu would so approve ♥

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halcyon_morn May 20 2009, 20:15:32 UTC
XD I'm honored to make you 8DD!!!.

If by "approve" you mean "get all flustered and trip over nothing and fall and bust his face up" (note: poor bb ;~;), then I agree. :D

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