Comments | hakuren: Theme 01: Ichi.Ruki: Fic

hakuren

Theme 01: Ichi.Ruki: Fic

Dec 29, 2006 10:54

Title: The Third Wall
Rating: PG at most...cursing? Only a bit!
Word Count: 5,479
Theme: 01
Notes/Warnings/etc: All quotes are property of Shakespeare. The cast of Bleach is copyright to and property of Kubo Tite. This is the first of the Ichi.Ruki 100 theme list, for me anyway. Wording isn’t exact, some liberties taken…spoilers for most of the series ( Read more... )

ichigo, fanfiction, theme, love, ichiruki, fanfic, rukia, tiny cage for a golden bird, fic

Comments 7

delusionised December 29 2006, 17:16:36 UTC

This is a beautiful story. *____* I love the ending. ♥

escarboucle December 29 2006, 19:14:45 UTC

Gyah, I love it, thanks a lot for sharing ^^

~Syn

hiona123 December 30 2006, 14:05:07 UTC

I love it so much!
I wish I can write an Ichiruki fanfic like you and everyone, but I not so good in english T_T
But anyways, thanks for sharing with us!

goldensniper December 30 2006, 14:42:58 UTC

Wonderful story, has such a strong meaning to it.
Thank you for taking the time to write it!

starvinbohemian April 29 2007, 00:16:04 UTC

This fic is gorgeous for many reasons, but I'm going to highlight two of my most random favorite parts:

"... his eyes burning into hers and she is further distressed by his own look of betrayal. It says the simple line of: how could you? And he means it. He loves her. She knows. She does not want to know anymore."

Oh, Renji. Ouch.

"Rukia-san’s drawings were… less than accurate."

Mostly an angsty fic, but OMG, I laughed at this.

Neither of those bits are IchiRuki, but I feel that you do them so well that I'm going to run out of ways to compliment you long before I'm done feedbacking all of your fics. ;)