I Want You To Be Update

[hailparadise]

So the epilogue for I Want You To Be is mostly written. But I'm starting to feel really sad about posting it. So I decided to take a moment to reach out to my readers. This story kind of followed it's own course, and didn't really hit all of the events I had in my mind for our boys. I feel like a lot of the potential problems set up in the story

Comments

[chinablues]

Weeeelll, not to say you have any plot holes that my initial reading picked up on, but... A look at the possible near connections might be interesting. As in the two of them looking in the same direction but never seeing each other, or opposite directions leaving a gaping hole between them. A better explanation might be oblivious!Kurt with interested!Blaine, and vice versa. Also, who was Kurt confessing to in the start of chapter six, it might be interesting to see Kurt and Blaine from an outsider's viewpoint. Were they clued in, and frustrated as we were?

Just thoughts, though, I'll be happy with whatever you decide to gift us. ;-)

[hailparadise]

Thanks for your feedback!

Yeah, Harper is a character than I introduced in the chapter 2 scene where Kurt is at the club with his friends. I have a great headcannon for their relationship, and kind of modeled her off of a combination of two of my closest friends at Oberlin, and would love the opportunity to include more of her in future incarnations of this verse.

But showing something about them from the perspective of Harper is something I never even considered. And kind of has the potential for an awesome one shot. I'm gonna have to go sleep on that now ...

[chinablues]

I get a small lift out of prompting, kind of along the lines of 'those that can't do...' I hope it gives you some ideas you can use.