Restless now and fearless

Nov 07, 2011 11:28

Untitled IV

Epiphany. A clarity.
A streak of lightning flashed.
Undoubtedly, irreversibly
Dawned on me at last.

A freedom, a release
That I had never known
A risky path, an alien path
I dare to tread alone.

Restless now and fearless
The weight on me is lifted.
Strong and at my bravest,
A new burden is accepted.

freewriting

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whathellohwell November 7 2011, 10:00:20 UTC
a) Go get it! Whatever it is.
b) Good job for snapping out of it!
c) None of the above.

I like this. Concise. Not a word wasted.

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hail_ro November 7 2011, 23:41:57 UTC
a. Timing is key.
b. Like getting splashed with a bucket of cold water.
c. My fingers are crossed.

Thanks!

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