Nov 07, 2011 11:28
Untitled IV
Epiphany. A clarity.
A streak of lightning flashed.
Undoubtedly, irreversibly
Dawned on me at last.
A freedom, a release
That I had never known
A risky path, an alien path
I dare to tread alone.
Restless now and fearless
The weight on me is lifted.
Strong and at my bravest,
A new burden is accepted.
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b) Good job for snapping out of it!
c) None of the above.
I like this. Concise. Not a word wasted.
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b. Like getting splashed with a bucket of cold water.
c. My fingers are crossed.
Thanks!
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