Of turtles and other things.

Nov 01, 2011 16:57

Prose IV

Mattie sat comfortably on the stone bench and stared intently at the sky. The American Cemetery was deserted and quiet. How nice, she thought. She had come there to think. It was uncharacteristic of her, really. She had visited the cemetery twice before but this was the first time she went there alone. She realized that she appreciated the ( Read more... )

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whathellohwell November 1 2011, 10:32:04 UTC
Awesome that quote. "You don't love someone because he loves you too. You love someone simply because you do."

This is great :) Like. Like. Like.

You forgot the amazing, heart-stopping twist!

Before Mattie could notice, Jimmy went back, walking painstakingly slow though he could never have felt that, stood behind her, and ripped her arm off and ate it while walking into the setting sun, leaving Mattie bleeding and loving it. *sparkle sparkle*

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hail_ro November 1 2011, 23:50:47 UTC
Thanks!

And you had to go there, didn't you? >_

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dolphin1122 December 8 2011, 06:05:51 UTC
Very, very nice :)

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