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haearnmouse

Bleach // Drabble // First Words

Dec 06, 2005 17:47

Title :: First Words
Setting :: Bleach
Characters :: Yachiru, Kenpachi
Words :: 680
Related Stories :: Teething Pains, Learning New Tricks

( The woman standing before him, scowling as though she might actually be scary enough to pull it off was a joke, really. )

bleach, bleach :: yachiru, series :: raising yachiru, bleach :: zaraki

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meallanmouse December 7 2005, 04:13:51 UTC

You'll get more. I like this series and there's a lot to do with it. ;)

And now, gimme three words for the next one! >:D

anonymous December 7 2005, 01:27:52 UTC

*thinks Hisana*

Hee, I enjoyed reading this.

celira December 7 2005, 01:28:33 UTC

...that was also my comment. Please to let me log in, Livejournal!

But yes. Well-written.

meallanmouse December 7 2005, 04:15:22 UTC

:: beams ::

Thank you! And I wasn't thinking of Hisana then (and I have the sequel to this one already in mind) but you are giving me ideas for something else further down the line. Very much involving Hisana, though per'aps not in the anticipated way Bwah. >:D

innocentlyjaded December 7 2005, 04:22:49 UTC

short and sweet. i like this very much ^_^ please do more.

meallanmouse December 8 2005, 02:16:07 UTC

:: grins ::

Thank ye, and I plan on it. :) There's been a lot of Yachiru/Zaraki type stuff of late on the comm though for some reason. Am mildly worried about burning out people on it. XD

futago_02 December 7 2005, 04:43:41 UTC

this was simply awesome. i wish i'd been that woman to see something so cute! ;)

meallanmouse December 8 2005, 02:16:47 UTC

Her instant and heartfelt response though, is along the lines of "The big scary man IS NOT CUTE AT ALL!" which makes me snicker a great deal. ;)

Hee!

lightseeker_81 December 7 2005, 07:49:05 UTC

Awww...very cute indeed. Kenpachi never saw that one coming. *lmao*

meallanmouse December 8 2005, 02:17:15 UTC

Kenpachi = mountain dropped on head out of nowhere, kaboom baby!

:: cackles ::