Comments | haearnmouse: Drabbles // Bleach // Kon, Ichigo

haearnmouse

Drabbles // Bleach // Kon, Ichigo

Oct 12, 2005 10:46

For :: cymry
Title :: Strawberries
Setting :: Bleach
Characters :: Kon
Words :: 585
Requirement :: thematic ~ Kon, keywords - ivy, box, hunger

( Kon stares up at the ceiling and sighs once more, fluffy little chest heaving up and down cutely. )

bleach

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meallanmouse October 13 2005, 02:06:51 UTC

Edited or edited as variations thereof.

And the parenthesis just happen all on their own, I swear. ;)

blonde_warning October 12 2005, 23:43:08 UTC

Great job! I loved them!

meallanmouse October 13 2005, 02:07:21 UTC

:: beams ::

Thank you!

acesodapop October 13 2005, 00:03:54 UTC

...not even annoying skinny little shinigami girls intent on getting themselves killed so badly that you had to bring the heavens down to their knees to get the point across through to them that it just wasn't going to happen.

that is so true and ichigo-like! i love his wisdom, even if it is a bit ill-worded and with mucho abuse to pronouns and lackof. this was very sweet and light-hearted, and all of a sudden it takes a sinister turn at the end. i LOVE that.

the hollow within sweetly falling back into dreams of blood and death.

ohhh. oh. ohhh. you have the best way with words, it's terrific~ <33

meallanmouse October 13 2005, 02:09:19 UTC

It's hard to balance inner monologue slash narration at times, but really, I just go with the flow and babble. ;)

First time I write Ichico. He's fun. All sharp angles and grr and "well d'uh!" along with a hefty dose or permanent hidden little boy bewilderment.

Thank ye! :D