Comments | haearnmouse: Drabble // Bleach // Raising Yachiru // A Day in the Forest

haearnmouse

Drabble // Bleach // Raising Yachiru // A Day in the Forest

Dec 20, 2005 15:39

Title :: A Day in the Forest
Setting :: Bleach
Series :: Raising Yachiru
Characters :: Yachiru, Kenpachi and a special guest appearance ;)
Words :: 1740
Related Stories :: Teething Pains, Learning New Tricks, First Words, Winter Days, Hide and Seek.

( The screams in the distance had a different quality than the ones Kenpachi and Yachiru were used to... )

bleach, bleach :: yachiru, series :: raising yachiru, bleach :: zaraki

Comments 20

starswing December 20 2005, 21:16:32 UTC

Oh, this is so much.... wow. I adore this! Unohana observing this cute little girl and "OMGKEELJ00" Kenpachi, and her determined to save his eye... XD Especially love the end with the eyepatch. Oh, Ken-chan, you dork.

meallanmouse December 23 2005, 04:38:41 UTC

:D I knew I had to have them meet at one point. Wasn't sure how, yet. Heh!

And the original version didn't have that ending. I just had to add it before posting, once I realized something was nagging at me about it.

fairywine December 21 2005, 00:34:28 UTC

Hahaha.Ken-chan no baka.-.- You're going to have to do better than that to get the lovely Unohana-sama's forgiveness!After the trouble she went through to save your eye,you actually have the nerve to cover it up? Bad Ken-chan,bad! Even if nerve is the secret motto of the 11th division...

More please!!!!!!!!!

meallanmouse December 23 2005, 04:39:09 UTC

:: grins ::

There will be more. ;) Whee!

raynos December 21 2005, 00:53:23 UTC

Ha! Really fun explanation of how Kenpachi got that scar over his eye. I loved your Unohana voice here, she's both motherly and fierce. =D

meallanmouse December 23 2005, 04:40:10 UTC

Thank you! I figured, even before she made captain, she had to have had a similar attitude. Somethings are bone deep.

(Now, when do I get to write scary Unohana I wonder? Bwah.)

hardlyfatal December 21 2005, 01:22:15 UTC

I adore Kenpach/Unohana so this was esp. enjoyable for me, thanks for a great read :)

meallanmouse December 23 2005, 04:40:48 UTC

:: beams ::

I'm glad you liked it!

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meallanmouse December 23 2005, 04:41:28 UTC

I knew they had to come in at one point. This and the scar felt like a good fit.

Also, settling in a neat background as to Kenpachi's feelings about fighting with a soul slayer vs not needing one.

:: hides ::

Hee!