I'm fashionably late. Fashion. Like a fedora.thatsmycouchApril 9 2011, 07:41:46 UTC
Hello there! :)
Thank you for threading with me at d_m! Or rather, I suppose I should say thank you for putting up with my poor fledgling muse. I hope I didn't manage to annoy poor Bosco too much. ♥
That said, I wanted to mention that your muse's voice is exceptionally clear. From the chopped manner of speaking to following Jane's lead-in, it was a joy to thread with such a well-developed character.
I hope he's recovered well from his forest-rest! Thanks again, and I hope to see him around. :)
Re: I'm fashionably late. Fashion. Like a fedora.hadtobe_saidApril 10 2011, 02:30:20 UTC
Jane's very existence annoys Bosco, so if you did that's a good thing.
You're character isn't fledgling at all; I found his dialogue and narrative to be very in character. I found him very fun to interact with. You're doing a great job with him. I'd love to thread with him with any of my Mentalist muses (Bosco, Kristina or Red John)
Welcome to mentalist_games as well. We haven't done much with it, but you're welcome to use it as a dressing room. At some point I'm going to pull together a case study role play, I think, but I'd love for the com to be used more.
Thank you! I'm working hard to get Jane's character down properly, and any feedback is good feedback, as far as writing is concerned.
A case study role play sounds fantastic. I love the idea. I also find it comforting that there's almost a mini-hub for Mentalist lovers in the RP world; it's like finding a warm cup of tea already there for you when you get home. I can't promise I'll always be amazing and perfectly in character, but I can promise that I'll do my best and learn from my mistakes. :)
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Thank you for threading with me at d_m! Or rather, I suppose I should say thank you for putting up with my poor fledgling muse. I hope I didn't manage to annoy poor Bosco too much. ♥
That said, I wanted to mention that your muse's voice is exceptionally clear. From the chopped manner of speaking to following Jane's lead-in, it was a joy to thread with such a well-developed character.
I hope he's recovered well from his forest-rest! Thanks again, and I hope to see him around. :)
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You're character isn't fledgling at all; I found his dialogue and narrative to be very in character. I found him very fun to interact with. You're doing a great job with him. I'd love to thread with him with any of my Mentalist muses (Bosco, Kristina or Red John)
Welcome to mentalist_games as well. We haven't done much with it, but you're welcome to use it as a dressing room. At some point I'm going to pull together a case study role play, I think, but I'd love for the com to be used more.
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A case study role play sounds fantastic. I love the idea. I also find it comforting that there's almost a mini-hub for Mentalist lovers in the RP world; it's like finding a warm cup of tea already there for you when you get home. I can't promise I'll always be amazing and perfectly in character, but I can promise that I'll do my best and learn from my mistakes. :)
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