Olympics RPS - The Person's Republic of Michael Phelps (MP/RL NC-17, 2/2)

[hackthis]

I've heard that there are people who can write a closing without it becoming twice as long as they intended. I am not one of those people.

Olympics RPS
Michael Phelps/Ryan Lochte
Rated NC-17

The Person's Republic of Michael Phelps

Part One

( Part Two )

Comments

[navy_brat_1972]

I like this story, but here's my one thing: I'm from Jacksonville FL and Gainesville is like only a few minutes away. We used to drive to the UofF campus on weekends (God only knows why...my friend and I are FSU), Orlando is the HOURS away (A good 4 hour drive).

But, not knowing where you're from...I had to point this out b/c people NOT from the area assume the "G-spot" is soooooooooooooooooo far from Jax and it's not.

Other than that...LOVE IT! Now, must go re-read. ;)

[hackthis]

I felt I was rather vague in the beginning with the time frame. I put in hours because the sentence included Orlando, which I know is several hours away. I also know from MapQuest that the distance between JIA and Gainesville is 70 miles, so I'm not really sure what you're referring to.

Regardless, I'm glad you liked the story.

[navy_brat_1972]

Yeah...but I can see your point. It didn't connect right away that you were including ORL. But, maybe it was closer to me because I drive really fast! :) It's just been my experience that people not from the area think it's farther than it is, which is why I pointed that out...I also lived in Orange Park, which is 15 minutes south of JAX, which could explain. But, I never drove JIA to Gspot, so...But, Orlando is only 4 hours away. Unless of course you drive really really really REALLY painfully slow! :)

Just be careful in relying on mapquest...I used to live like 1 block from the main road and it would say that it was a mile away. Or maybe it was user error! :D

[aimeelicious]

I <3 Olympic Porn.

I need a t-shirt with that saying on it!

[hackthis]

LOL! Quite.

[frankiness]

*guh* I think my brain just melted that was so amazing. Your voice for Michael and Ryan are exactly as I imagined they would be, wow. Thanks for writing!! *_*

[hackthis]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

[thisisbone]

Formatting for the Kindle as we speak! \o/

[hackthis]

I have been Kindleized! (Yes, that is a new word, what?)

[thisisbone]

WOOHOOOO!

Let me know if you want any tips for formatting files (bear in mind I have a PC, not a Mac). I also have a TON of fanfic already formatted for the Kindle. And I have "The Killer Elite" as a Kindle file if you want it.

Feel free to email me at trueblueism at aol dot com!

[agape_eternal]

Can I just tell you how much I fucking LOVE this?

The Clinton ref, OMFG. I don't think I've laughed this hard since your LAST installment when I was in tears in the middle of the library from laughing so fucking hard.

Man, you fucking rock, seriously.

What is, is ;)

Oh yeah, and the butterflies? Not cool man, I have a phobia XDD

[hackthis]

The Clinton ref, OMFG. I don't think I've laughed this hard since your LAST installment when I was in tears in the middle of the library from laughing so fucking hard.

You know, I figured only maybe 1/2 of the people would get that, but I laughed like an idiot for what it's worth. You have a butterfly phobia? How is that possible, what did the butterflies do to you? They are not spiders. Spiders are gnarly.

[agape_eternal]

XD it's great

LMAO i don't KNOW what they did, but I do. So does Nicole Kidman, not that that's any consolation XDD