Dark Knight - Now the Old King is Dead, Long Live the King (Bruce Wayne/ Harvey Dent, NC-17)

Aug 08, 2008 14:50

It took me like six or seven tries to make this happen. At one point I was just going to toss in the towel, and then lo, the voices spoke to me.

Don't ever say I never gave you anything.

The Dark Knight
Bruce Wayne/Harvey Dent,
Rated NC-17

Now the Old King is Dead, Long Live the King

It's not a smile, it's a predatory declaration of intent. )

random fandom yay!

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heidi8 August 8 2008, 22:28:03 UTC
That was utterly perfect. Oh, Bruce's head is a wild and strange place to spend a few hours, isn't it?

(And why is this the only Batman-ish icon I still have? Must remedy that...)

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hackthis August 12 2008, 20:30:27 UTC
Hey, you're better than me, I have NO Batman icons! But I am very glad you liked this, thanks!

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icyanahita August 8 2008, 22:41:04 UTC
Oh man, this was...*speechless*. Dude I loved everything from the title of the fic to the fact it was dream. Makes so much sense.

It's just Bruce Wayne, alone again.

But, maybe, if he believes in Harvey Dent, he doesn't have to be.

It fits so well into the whole film. Makes so much sense,

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hackthis August 12 2008, 20:30:43 UTC
I'm so glad you think it worked, thanks!

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jcalanthe August 8 2008, 22:54:41 UTC
Oh wow. Just wow.

I think the end of the first dream is my favorite. But I also love Harvey Dent in the Batman tie, and well, all of it. I can't put it into words, but this story feels a lot different from what you usually write. I could never tire of your writing, but it's also really fun to see something totally different. Well, the super-hot part, that's pretty much always in your writing and does not disappoint here.

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hackthis August 12 2008, 20:32:19 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I ended up re-editing it a little in the mid-section (I am never done with any story), but for the most part I am very pleased too. I'm not sure how it's different, but as long as it works, I'm happy.

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raveninthewind August 9 2008, 00:04:04 UTC
hackthis August 12 2008, 20:32:30 UTC
Oh, how lovely. Thank you!

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evalinece August 9 2008, 00:11:36 UTC
I completely loved it! And come on, we all know Bruce wants to be tied up by a tie with the Batman logo on it.

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hackthis August 12 2008, 20:33:13 UTC
Thanks!

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