Oh, Matt Saracen, how are you so awesome and so hot? Really? Also, initially this pairing did something weird to my brain and made it think we were writing Superman Returns/ Batverse again.
Friday Night Lights
Jason/Tim (Jason/Lyla, Tim/Tyra)
Spoilers for 1.07 'El Accidente'
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Anyway, fantastic job. If I hadn't already been convinced of the big Street/Rigg love, I would be now. I liked the bit about Jason's mother being against his friendship with Tim at first; it makes the bit in the show about her making an effort to still include Tim more poignant. I always sort of imagined Tim lusting after Jason, but you sell it nicely the other way around--although really, who doesn't want to fuck Tim Riggins?
I wish I could pick out my favorite bits, but I suck hardcore at crap like that so I'll just say that the way you let the dialogue stand on its own without explicitly stating all the thought and doublespeak behind it is great. Your style is very clean, which I definitely enjoy.
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