FNL - Man Up (NC-17)

Nov 08, 2006 13:29

Oh, Matt Saracen, how are you so awesome and so hot? Really? Also, initially this pairing did something weird to my brain and made it think we were writing Superman Returns/ Batverse again.

Friday Night Lights
Jason/Tim (Jason/Lyla, Tim/Tyra)
Spoilers for 1.07 'El Accidente'
Rated Adult
Beta by antheia, coercion by musesfool, dedicated to lyra_sena, remaining fuck-ups ( Read more... )

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romancandles November 16 2006, 01:42:30 UTC
I can't believe no one told me this fic existed. God, LJ, way to fail.

Anyway, fantastic job. If I hadn't already been convinced of the big Street/Rigg love, I would be now. I liked the bit about Jason's mother being against his friendship with Tim at first; it makes the bit in the show about her making an effort to still include Tim more poignant. I always sort of imagined Tim lusting after Jason, but you sell it nicely the other way around--although really, who doesn't want to fuck Tim Riggins?

I wish I could pick out my favorite bits, but I suck hardcore at crap like that so I'll just say that the way you let the dialogue stand on its own without explicitly stating all the thought and doublespeak behind it is great. Your style is very clean, which I definitely enjoy.

And this is why I don't leave feedback often. I always embarrass myself.

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hackthis December 15 2006, 21:02:01 UTC
I'm all late to reply to comments, I suck. Oh wait, no I don't because I am totally percolating a Jason/Tim idea. I just -- I can't stay away it's too much hotassery and angst, plus, hello, Tim had his boyfriend's photo up in his LOCKER! He's totally thirteen year-old girl who draws sparkly hearts around Street's picture in the local paper. What?

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misspamela November 16 2006, 02:16:48 UTC
Oh, that just hit the SPOT. Exactly what I needed; thank you!

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hackthis December 15 2006, 21:02:15 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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oxoniensis December 12 2006, 00:11:17 UTC
How I love first times, and this, I loved this!

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hackthis December 15 2006, 21:02:52 UTC
I love this fandom like I'm blind.

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greenapricot December 18 2006, 04:39:17 UTC
Oh, these boys. I love this.

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aimless_words January 10 2007, 06:14:30 UTC
mmmmmm, yes. exactly.

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