PORN - it’s what’s for lunch (dS - Oral Fix)

[hackthis]

serialkarma is out of sorts. I said porn will fix that. Unabashedly dirty, sweaty NC-17 porn without any other purpose. She said, duh. This was supposed to be Lost-fic, but she threw me off when she said no Sawyer.

due South
RayK/Fraser

Comments

[shayheyred]

Good. God.
You have actually induced a heart attack. Almost.
But in the very best way possible.

[hackthis]

Oh, so it is okay to put 'Porn Overdose' on your Death Certificate. I just want to check.

[shayheyred]

What a way to go!

[pearl_o]

Mmmmmmm. Also guh. Yaaaaaaay, porn.

[hackthis]

Yaaaaay, porn!

That's like the best cheer ever, isn't it?

[ghost_lingering]

Oh, wow. Really wow.

*pauses a moment for the sake of coherence*

That was really good, not just in the 'OMG porn!' way, but in the 'OMG I want to write like that when I grow up!' way. Because it was really and honestly wonderful. I'm not good at comprehensive feedback, only the sort of 'Wow, that was awesome!' that everyone does, but I'd like to point out that the thing that struck me most was how it was Ray who had a(n oral) fixation with Fraser's fingers, when usually the oral fixations (or, really fixations of any kind) seem to go to Fraser. A reversal of sorts, but wonderful.

Thank you for posting!

[hackthis]

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it so much, and I have to say after extensive viewing of S1 I don't understand how anyone couldn't have a slight obsession interest in Fraser's fingers, you know?

[kassrachel]

Long, loud, fifteen minute guitar solos and punk odes to Fraser’s fingers.

Yep. That's my Kowalski, all right. :-)

Seriously twitchy, itchy, craving-junkie, type addicted with the whole Pavler - Pilaf - really strong reaction thing happening.

::lol:: That verbal tic of Ray's is hard to write well, but this one totally worked for me.

The last thing he notices before falling asleep is the way that Fraser’s fingers fit with his.

Aww. :-)

[hackthis]

I'm so pleased that this worked for you, thank you for commenting! :)

[lalejandra]

FRASER NOISES OF DOOM.

Man, I wish I'd seen this in time for lunch. It beats a curry, hands down.

[hackthis]

Dude, I laughed myself stupid over that line.