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[hackthis]

Once a label is on something
It becomes an ‘it’
Like it's no longer alive

It's like a loss of vision
Or some dark impression
Or a black spot on your eye
-Morcheeba

Movieverse: X2

Comments

[jb_slasher]

Hmm. I wanted to kill Bobby for hitting Johnny. Hmm. Oops. Yeah. This was.. in a way nice and.. yes, I know I'm crappy at feedback. But I liked it. It's how.. Johnny is smarter than Bobby. Bobby screws up and Johnny just.. is Johnny. I don't know. But this was good. Yes. It's good.

[hackthis]

Hmm. I wanted to kill Bobby for hitting Johnny. Hmm. Oops. Yeah. This was.. in a way nice and.. yes, I know I'm crappy at feedback. But I liked it. It's how.. Johnny is smarter than Bobby. Bobby screws up and Johnny just.. is Johnny. I don't know. But this was good. Yes. It's good.

Bobby's not a bad kid, he just has posessiveness issues. To quote The Duke, "I'm not a jealous man, I just don't like people touching my things."

[jb_slasher]

People have been there, including myself, I have to admit.

[resplendissante]

I loved the exposition here; slow enough to build up the tension, but fast enough that it doesn't drag. The Bobby characterization in particular was spot-on -- great work!

[hackthis]

I loved the exposition here; slow enough to build up the tension, but fast enough that it doesn't drag. The Bobby characterization in particular was spot-on -- great work!

What lovely feedback, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

[titti]

Loved this fic. The feeling of it is just perfect.

BTW, where is Lar hiding this improv?

[hackthis]

Loved this fic. The feeling of it is just perfect.

BTW, where is Lar hiding this improv?

It's not a public improv, I'm sorry, it's just some words she gave me to play with. I'm glad you enjoyed the story though, thanks!

Re:

[titti]

Oh, I thought she was running a X Men Improv to go with the Buffy one. :)

I'll look forward to see your HP fics as well. Oh, the joy of multi fandoms.

[kdorian]

Watch me melt.

But geeze! Hitting Piotr? Owww! Punishment enough, I think.

[hackthis]

Watch me melt.

But geeze! Hitting Piotr? Owww! Punishment enough, I think.

He's not the smartest boy, our Bobby, but his heart is in the right place. Kinda.

[suaine]

Uhm, how can I say this in a nice way? I want to have your children!

Your the Goddess of Bobby/St. John. You rule my (X2)world!

[hackthis]

Uhm, how can I say this in a nice way? I want to have your children!

Your the Goddess of Bobby/St. John. You rule my (X2)world!

*laughs* I'm glad you liked it.