do i need to give up on writing?

[h_moore817]

the pain and hurt will go away
in the time of all of this dismay
things we can't comprehend
will all soon start to mend

i can't wrap my head around this
nor can you, who can believe this?
we've not wanted to
we don't know what to do

life without you won't be the same
we will never forget your name
forever you'll be in our hearts
and with that, we shall never

Comments

[gelisa1]

Wow that's really good,is that a poem? I have a song posted on my page but of course no one has told me what they think of it,haha but anyway do you write your own poems and stuff?

[h_moore817]

no way! are you serious? is it really good? lol if not you can tell me. and i'll look at your stuff.
and yeah i do, but i didn't think they were anything worth reading. i like writing but i suck at it. lol.

[gelisa1]

Seriously it is good. For some odd reason i seem to be better at song writing then poems,haha.

[h_moore817]

well thank you. : )
and yeah i like yours a lot.

[coteo]

This is really pretty, hun. You're a nice writer. I've written a few poems here and there, but as far as writing goes, I'm much better at stories. Lol. I just can't seem to do those ryming things...

[h_moore817]

are you serious?
i really never seem to think so, haha. but thank you!
i've written a few short stories, but i get so sidetracked and ramble too much, haha.

[coteo]

I love writing stories. So much. I've had a few done and I've been thinking of starting a new ORIGINAL fic soon to try to get published but... eh. Never got around to it.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2441504/1/Searching_For_The_Unstable

These are some of mine. Poems, I mean. See? Not all that spectacular. They're...so-so.

[h_moore817]

"so-so"? whaaat? that is amazing. i can't write anything like that. haha i can just rhyme.