I've Traveled all this Way for Something - Steve/Danny - R

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Author: annieke
Recipient: jstabe
Title: I've Traveled all this Way for Something
Pairings/Characters: Steve/Danny; Kono; Chin, OMC
Summary: Sometimes a rock is just a rock. Other times it's love.
Rating: Mature - R
Content: A little pining. A little h/c. A little word abuse.
Word Count: ~5000
Disclaimer: All Hawaii Five-0 characters herein are the property of

Comments

[carryokee]

This is fabulous! I absolutely adore Danny's stream-of-consciousness POV. And his characterization is especially spot on. Word of the day...ha! I can totally see Danny doing this.

Thanks for sharing.

[annieke]

Thank you--I'm glad you think so!

[simplyn2deep]

A little word abuse. I'll say! but in the best possible way of course!

Steve being a bit jealous of model-like guy from the bar is cute.

those boys. they really need to learn how to communicate better.

[annieke]

I know, word abuse. lol
and yes, they do need to communicate better.

[iluvstevemcg]

Marvelous! Love Danny's POV.

Toward the beginning, I misread and thought the sentence said, 'take off your pants so I can get to *blow* you better'

Ha! ::gutter::

[annieke]

Hilarious! Somehow I'm working that into a fic...
thanks for reading!

[mcparrot]

Awwww. Cute.
Word of the day.... hahaha
Yay for cute guys in bars.

(oh, just caught a really interesting typo just in time. I wrote cut guys in bars.)

[annieke]

That's hilarious, too (see above comment)
Very fun. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[kitmerlot1213]

This was just lovely!

The McDanno had some wonderfully flirty moments and good for Steve for finally letting Danny know that he was interested in him as well--YEAH :)

However, I do wish Danny got to punch Zippy out, especially after his insulting comments and his trying to stab our favorite mainlander but Chin's knocking the bad guy out was cool too.

[annieke]

Glad you liked this little fic...thank you for the comment!