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The Caper on 5th and Japip - Steve/Danny - R

Sep 03, 2012 13:04

Author: kitmerlot1213
Recipient: carryokee
Title: The Caper on 5th and Japip
Pairings/Characters: Steve and Danny, OMCs
Summary: Danny’s always wanted to write a hardboiled detective novel.
Rating: R for swearing
Content: AU; noir mystery of the hardboiled variety
Warnings: There is violence, but nothing too graphic
Word Count: 2558
Disclaimer: All Hawaii Five-0 ( Read more... )

r, steve/danny, round 3

Comments 8

simplyn2deep September 3 2012, 17:23:28 UTC

I love that Danny wanted to include every noir cliche out there.

love love LOVE Charlie Chan, and I love love LOVE this!

also, the Neo noir slash genre sounds really interesting.

kitmerlot1213 September 20 2012, 20:04:53 UTC

Film noir is extremely addicting and I understand Danny's need to want to use every cliche out there :)

I loved the Charlie Chan movies and Mr. Moto wasn't too bad either.

Thank you for the lovely comments :)

superbadgirl September 3 2012, 19:27:11 UTC

Aw, cute! I enjoyed this little universe.

kitmerlot1213 September 20 2012, 20:06:38 UTC

I'm glad that it worked for you :):)

annieke September 3 2012, 20:57:11 UTC

Clever, very fun read. Loved the parallel characters, and the wit threaded throughout. Nice!

kitmerlot1213 September 20 2012, 20:08:30 UTC

Thanks for such a lovely comment and I'm glad you liked my story :)

carryokee September 4 2012, 19:08:29 UTC

This was completely made of WIN. \o/

I absolutely love AUs and Danny as a writer is one of my secret fantasies, so this is just perfect. And especially since he's writing "neo noir slash" under a pseudonym...guh, that just makes it that much better.

I must say, I really loved the excerpts from Danny's book. I think I grinned the whole time I was reading them, which is rare for me. The dialogue! The similes! Perfect.

And the character names! Joe Kelly & Will Stevens...such great amalgams of the show's character names. And in my head, Jackie Jordan is Kono Kalakaua, just because of the alliteration.

Anyway, THANK YOU, dear writer. I really loved this. ♥

kitmerlot1213 September 20 2012, 20:11:41 UTC

I am so glad that you liked this AU and that it didn't disappoint :)

The exerpts from the book were my favorite parts because I loved making the conversations as hardboiled as I could.

Lastly, thank you for leaving such positive feed back--you don't know how much I appreciate it. :)