blame it on the ocean view - Steve/Danny - NC-17

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Author: carryokee
Recipient: theellibu
Title: blame it on the ocean view
Pairings/Characters: Steve/Danny
Summary: Danny gives in, freaks out, and comes to his senses.
Rating: NC-17
Content: N/A
Warnings: N/A
Word Count: 5,050
Disclaimer: All Hawaii Five-0 characters herein are the property of CBS. No copyright infringement is intended. All characters engaging in

Comments

[bfive0]

This was awesome!!

[carryokee]

I'm so glad you thought so! Thank you so much!

[annieke]

Completely perfect. I've read it twice and am typing this in a hurry to go read again. The use of tenses is really well done. Love the dialog, very them. and yeah, echoing the 'so hot' theme here. It is and also so richly told, full of emotion in all that sex-- and yeah. so satisfying. like chocolate ;)

[carryokee]

When I was reading it over, I kept thinking that it was strange that I chose present tense for the past events and past tense for the present events. But that's just the way it came out and so I just left it that way. It seems to work pretty well.

Thank you for reading! I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. :)

[celspi]

Enjoyed this story so much! Liked the way the flashbacks were used to inform what was happening in the present. The hot sex had such a lovely emotional touch with such visual elements like the laced fingers.. such a beautiful image. Appreciated the angst but loved the happy ending. Fabulous job! :)

[carryokee]

Yeah, I had to give the boys a happy ending. For one, my recipient wanted one, and secondly, it seemed kinda cruel not to give them one. Anyway, I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you so much for reading!

[carryokee]

Thank you!

[team_allen]

loved this!

[carryokee]

I'm so glad! Thank you for reading!