YB Fanfic, Ch. 10

[h311ybean]

(I told myself I would wait until I had sent in all my Gates Foundation job apps before updating, but sod it. I am feeling crappy these days and updating makes me happy.)

Previously:
Chapter 1: Hello I Love You
Chapter 2: My Brave Face
Chapter 3: Temperamental
Chapter 4: Million Dollar Smile
Chapter 5: Heart Messenger
Chapter 6: Somewhere in

Comments

Ha-neul's outfits in this chapter

[h311ybean]

Goddess of Wisdom (photo shoot)
Fashion show after-party
Goddess of War (billboard)

Re: Ha-neul's outfits in this chapter

[lilivanilla1]

Oh wow, very beautiful outfits! ♥

Now, I want Ha-neul's After-Party bag! =D

Re: Ha-neul's outfits in this chapter

[h311ybean]

I'm glad you like them :) It was fun making more glamorous outfits for a change!

Re: Ha-neul's outfits in this chapter

[dawnfarie]

I love the After-Party bag and looks like it is hot property :P

The outfits are as usual - very very well-coordinated!

ps. maybe you can be JGS style coordinator too!

[akaironoyoru]

haven't commented before but i love your fic :P and omg the jgs comments in here are hilarious.

Tae-kyung sniffed disdainfully. "He dresses funny."

XDDDDDDD

[h311ybean]

Hi! I remember you from when I first started posting :D I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.

I loved inserting JGS in there. Good thing the universe didn't implode when he and Tae-kyung were in the same place together.

(And he does dress funny! Have you seen him on the red carpet? LOL)

[akaironoyoru]

oh i did reply before?....lol anyway XD i'm glad it didn't implode either. i read that part and **besides laughing alot** was like "this feels weird~" but in a good way lol

i like to think the way he dresses is.......unique :P haha

[h311ybean]

It's definitely unique - I don't think anyone else is ever going to dress the same way :-p

He has a really nice smile, though!

[lilivanilla1]

I'm glad to be back too!

Is it me or Jeremy's becoming more possessive now? =D
*completely approving this ship*

I love the way you depicted the Mi-nyeo/Tae-kyung relationship here! ♥
I think they make a really cute couple (even if I was a little heartbroken for Shin-woo while looking the drama T.T)

Aaaand, as for Shin-woo/Ha-neul, I really like the turn it takes! ♥
They admitted their feeling for each other (well, to themselves at least!) and dealt with the "situation" wisely :p
Now, I really want to hear this special song! Will it be his declaration? =D

*happy*

[h311ybean]

I think Jeremy is becoming a little more possessive, but I don't think he knows why yet ;) As always, those two are so much fun to write! I enjoyed writing Mi-nyeo here, too. I like her pairing with Tae-kyung as well - unfortunately for Shin-woo, those two were made for each other. I wish she could be around more often, but I imagine she has a life independent of the band.

And as for the song, I'm afraid you're going to have to wait a while to hear it. After all, this story is 16 chapters long - stuff still has to happen between now and the end ;)

[jay_ed]

back to comment ^___^

i bet you already know that i'm going to say " I LOVE JEREMY " <3

hehe i also love how you put Suk into the fic, and yes he dresses..funny and his hairstyle is sometimes funny too -.-

is jeremy going to fall for Su-jin for real and then be depressed because she might not feel the same? HAHA

[h311ybean]

Welcome back! And yes, I did have an idea of what you were going to say :D

Glad you liked JGS' brief appearance here, LOL. Yes, he also likes strange hairstyles! Honestly, I applaud him for pushing his limits, but I would appreciate his efforts much more if he didn't look so ridiculous most of the time. Good thing there's nothing he can do to his pretty, pretty face!

As for Jeremy and Su-jin... I'm afraid you're going to have to wait to find out ;) (but I guess it should be sort of obvious that will happen since I listed "Jeremy/OC" as a pairing for this fic)

[jay_ed]

lol Suk has the weirdest hairstyles ever, and not only weird, they dont lok that good :X (like his current permed one -.-) but then sometimes he has awesome looking hair <3

haha..i think when i read this fic, there are so many things i wanted to comment on because it's so well written, but at the end the only thing my brain i telling me is "OMG JEREMY IS SO ADORABLE" ^^"

[h311ybean]

Hee! I'm glad you're enjoying the way I write Jeremy. Coming from you, "OMG JEREMY IS SO ADORABLE" is an enormous compliment!

:D :D :D

[dawnfarie]

Another fantastic chapter. I thought I missed reading it cos it seemed so long from the last chapter!

And the appearance of JGS! *gasp* I seriously thought you were going to add him as a competitor against Shin-woo just for this chapter. Then it will be Shin-woo vs HTK all over again, only this time Shin-woo wins ;D

& Jeremy is beginning to show his jealousy! Hopefully this time round he can sing his "cheerup song" to Su-jin w/o the tears!

Who you think has better hairstyles? HTK or JGS? (since both of them have been caught in many styles)

-looks like we are 1/2 way to the end *starting to feel sad*-

[h311ybean]

I'm glad you liked it! :)

Don't worry, JGS was just there for comic relief :-p I just thought it would be really funny to have him and Tae-Kyung in the same place at the same time.

And in answer to your question, I think HTK's hairstyles are better than JGS'. I am not digging the curly wavy hairstyles :-p

Actually, we're more than halfway through the story - but that just means the next one is coming! ;)

[dawnfarie]

Omg! I just realised... if I were there, I would have either fainted from hyperventilation or just screamed LOL (sorry I wanted to go with multiple explosions of the mind but that would have been just too messy) if I were to see JGS and Tae-Kyung AT THE SAME TIME!

Thank goodness otherwise Shin-woo has to suffer another heart break yet again. If JGS was to really pursue Ha-neul and chased her successfully, Shin-woo would have lost to Tae-Kyung, Jeremy and JGS in that order. Ohh Jeremy is because of the fan-fiction where he might win Tae-kyung instead of Shin-woo. I don't know Shin-woo can take how much of this heart-break stuff.

I knowwwwwwwwwwwww... what's up with the curly wavy hairstyles? -cringe- HTK's hairstyle are definitely much better :D *agrees*

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ;D

[h311ybean]

It's a good thing Tae-kyung didn't look to closely at JGS' face or else he would have realized that there was an eerie resemblance... ;)

You don't have to worry about Shin-woo losing Ha-neul to JGS. Besides the fact that JGS is not Ha-neul's type, she's pretty certain about who she likes ^_^ She also does not dig JGS' hairstyles. I have no idea what JGS sees in them.

(And that's all your fault - I think you were the one suggesting that I write something about Go Mi-nam :-p I'm outlining that next fic now!)