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Re: Outfits in this chapter (now with music!) dawnfarie July 10 2010, 05:17:59 UTC
I love all 3 outfits and it seems you are dressing up the characters with the ladies in mind.

NICE XD

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Re: Outfits in this chapter (now with music!) h311ybean July 10 2010, 15:14:58 UTC
I felt like dressing Mi-nyeo, and of course Su-jin refused to be left out :-p

(Some of the previous outfits have soundtracks now, too!)

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Re: Outfits in this chapter (now with music!) dawnfarie July 11 2010, 15:56:45 UTC
:D Dressing up people can be quite fun!

(WoW! will go check it out)

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dawnfarie July 10 2010, 05:15:15 UTC
♥AWESOME CHAPTER♥

Tae-kyung snorted and raised his beer bottle to his lips. "Those two are made for each other," he muttered, "but they're both too stubborn to realize it."

"And you've seen that father of hers," Mi-nam added. "I bet that he'll beat us all into a pulp if anything happened to her, and I'm too pretty to die."

"Of course I still do, you silly girl!" Jeremy told her. "It's more important now that it's not an experiment anymore, but something real." He grabbed her wrist again, but this time she didn't complain. "Come on. We're telling everyone that we're back together again. And you had better make it convincing!"

I was almost running out of breath reading this chapter! hehe! I also highlighted some of my favorite parts.

But the last part, it would have been nice if Shin-woo allowed Ha-neul to rest on his lap instead of leaving her there alone :)

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h311ybean July 10 2010, 05:47:39 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! This part was a lot of fun to write, for many obvious reasons. Mi-nam's "too pretty to die" line is one of my favorites, too.

And I agree that would have been nice, but maybe it wasn't a very long bench so it would have been a tight fit with both him and Ha-neul on it :-p

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dawnfarie July 11 2010, 15:25:58 UTC
Hehehe I can imagine Mi-Nam saying that... afterall it was because of his botched plastic surgery that got Mi-Nyeo into the group in the first place. Quite a fitting line for him!

Yeah I guess it will also get more awkward between them if Shin-woo was to stay. Either way, it is still a good ending to an awesome chapter!

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anonymous July 10 2010, 08:29:23 UTC
Been reading this fanfic and I really look forward to new chapters, thanks! :D was just wondering, do you have in mind which actresses should play the parts of these new characters you introduce (at least, Ha-Neul and Su-Jin), IF this was really made into a tv drama? ;p

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h311ybean July 10 2010, 15:14:02 UTC
Thanks for your review! :)

In answer to your question, unfortunately I don't really have any actresses in mind :-/ I think Ha-neul looks like Yumiko Cheng, and Su-jin like Charlene Choi, but neither of those girls is Korean. I haven't encountered the right Korean actresses yet.

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lilivanilla1 July 12 2010, 15:53:01 UTC
"Don't waste your time trying to kiss me on the forehead," Ha-neul whispered, closing the distance between them and tilting her face up so that their lips could meet. "I'm much too tall for that."

AAAAAAAH! ♥ ♥ ♥

Ha-neul waited for the sound of his footsteps to die away before opening her eyes and pressing her hands to her flushed face. "If only I really were drunk," she whispered.

Aaaaaw!

... Best. Chapter. Ever!

I know I kinda suck at feedback, but I really want you to know that I'm enjoying this! Like, a lot =D
This fandom is so small... We're so lucky to have you! ^-^

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h311ybean July 12 2010, 16:10:07 UTC
Aaaw! Thank you so much :D

I'm really glad you liked the chapter, too!

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fighter_of_moon July 14 2010, 20:33:50 UTC
I've read 8 chapters, but hadn't found the time to comment about your story :(
But since you posted chapter 9 (which I can't wait to read it <3 I'm a M after all xD), I had to tell you my opinion ^^

You write very good and I love your ideas regarding this story <333 I'm happy that you stick with the characters from the drama You're beautiful and I love your new characters <333
I can't wait to see the development between Ha-Neul and Shin Woo; also I'd love if Go Mi Nam would find himself one partner too haha And about Su-Jin and Jeremy ...(though I hate to give up Jeremy >.<)...I'm hoping for more *rooting!* (I haven't read yet the 9th chapter xD)

What can I say more?
Please write more and delight us with your ideas <333

Thanks for writing and I'm waiting for more *loove*

Lots of hugs!

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h311ybean July 14 2010, 21:19:22 UTC
Hi :) Thank you very much for your review!

It's great hearing from people like you who have been following the story, and I'm very glad to hear that you're enjoying it thus far. Writing about the YB characters has been a lot of fun, and I'm glad you're enjoying my originals.

Re: Go Mi-nam, I'm planning to write a story about him next :D

I hope you enjoy Chapter 9! There will definitely be more to come!

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