hawaii 5-0 fic: maybe we're both too far gone [steve/danny]

[gyzym]

Right, so, leupagus and wheres_walnut and I were talking about nerdy high school Steve, and somehow I accidentally ended up writing a little bit of Curving Like The Ocean Toward You 'verse nonsense. So...here's that!

Sorry, dudes, it's 4 in the morning, that's all I got right now.

Title: Maybe We're Both Too Far Gone
Rating: PG, except for, you know, all the fucking

Comments

[bluespirit_star]

You had me at the summary. *g*

Fabulous - thank you! \o/

[lavender_basil]

When I read this was the "Curving Like The Ocean Toward You"-verse I almost squealed with delight.

You had me right here: “Bad news first,” Steve says, without looking up from the pile of mail he’s going through. Yes. I loved that Steve was reading the mail! There's just something so domestic and comfortable about that. And I LOVE domestic, comfortable, happy Steve.

So....when are Steve and Danny going to visit NJ? I'm sure there's a treasure trove of glorious pics from Danny's youth that Steve can plunder.

[wheres_walnut]

TO COUNTER LEUPAGUS: I AM GLAD I WENT TO SLEEP BUT I STILL LOVE THIS LIKE I AM BLIND.

[sirona_gs]

Oh my god!!! *dies from adorableness*

this weird combination of frightening automaton and neurotic goofy sap -- this sentence right here? EVERYTHING I LOVE ABOUT STEVE. EVERYTHING, IN ONE GLORIOUS LINE.

When my brain unbreaks, I am totally getting on with writing my high school AU big bang, this is inspiration in a shotglass! <333

[alba17]

Haha, they are too cute. Hee, fireball incidents. Great banter. *squints* it's just plausible that Steve was a dork in 9th grade. He's got that science-Steve thing after all.