spoken word poetry, what even.

[gyzym]

RIGHT SO

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[kavedelutan]

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[zolac_no_miko]

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Oh wow. I'm glad you recorded that one for us, because it's definitely meant to be read aloud, with all the rushes and pauses in all the right places, and yes, I am loving those internal rhymes.

I love, love, love that last line: let's call the beauty culture rome, and hope it falls and leaves behind a ruin for rebuilding, a new world, yours and mine. GUH, it's powerful, I love the Rome metaphor, and also let's have a rousing HEAR, HEAR!!

[twilight_la_fae]

Delurking to say: this is *awesome*. I really, really love it. ♥

[robanybody]

This is so beautiful. I teared up at the last line. ♥

[miznarrator]

Absolutely wonderful work, esp the aloudness. Absolutely agree with yr 5 am logic.

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