Comments | gyzym: [Five Times Fic, R to NC-17]

gyzym

[Five Times Fic, R to NC-17]

Jan 28, 2010 19:03

Title Five Times Sirius Walked in On James and Lily (And One Time it Was Remus)
Rating Somewhere between R and NC-17, I think.
Summary I think you guys can figure it out :D

( 'Padfoot,' James said, and winced. 'Uh, would you possibly believe this isn't what it looks like?' )

five things, harry potter, james/lily

Comments 18

purple_chalk January 29 2010, 00:19:52 UTC

Man that last one always makes me all mistyyyyyyy

gyzym January 29 2010, 04:31:38 UTC

Apologies :D

purple_chalk January 29 2010, 04:33:29 UTC

The good kind of misty, don't worry~

freaky_zero January 29 2010, 04:18:29 UTC

You make me love the Harry Potter fandom so hard. ♥

gyzym January 29 2010, 04:31:55 UTC

Hee, I'm glad! How's the sprog?

secretsolitaire January 29 2010, 04:19:16 UTC

I was all LOL!! and then I was all *sniffle*. Those last two totally broke me. And I love the R/S undercurrents throughout.

gyzym January 29 2010, 04:34:03 UTC

Sorry to break! But always glad to cause lols.

And yay, those R/S currents come through! I actually wrote the whole thing thinking it was very clear background R/S and then I reread it and went "Oh, guess I never mentioned that."

:D

secretsolitaire January 29 2010, 04:37:20 UTC

Well, I do tend to assume R/S given any evidence whatsoever, but yeah, it was clear to me. :-)

snegurochka_lee January 30 2010, 22:25:35 UTC

HOGOD WHAT. ;LKAJSLDKJF. I was all bouncing along laughing stupidly at the first few and loving how kinky and hot James and Lily are and how hilariously awesome Sirius is and how he was so grossed out in the first one (AHAHAHAHAHAHA) and stuff and then HOGOD the last two ripped my heart out of my body and stomped on it BUT IN A GOOD WAY DON'T GET ME WRONG and just, a;lskjdf.

ALSO, I'll have you know, I thought from the title that the one time would be Sirius catching James with Remus, ahaha, but then I got worried as I was reading, 'cuz I like adultery fic just fine, of course, but OMG James and Lily were so amazingly awesome and loving and sexy and if he'd cheated on her with Remus I would HAVE BEAT HIS STUPID ASS. a;lskfj. But he didn't, and OH GOD REMUS + PHOTO. *clutches heart*

♥ ♥ ♥

gyzym January 31 2010, 02:48:21 UTC

Heee, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'll be totally honest, the first few were such fun to write that I thought the whole thing would be humor, and then it got all dark while I wasn't really paying attention. Someday I'll post the...deleted scene, I suppose, is the appropriate term...in which Remus wanders into the showers to have a wash and Lily's hanging from the curtain bar as James fucks her :D

As for the kinkiness--James is a known troublemaker to begin with, and I can't see Lily enjoying anything other than an, ah, unusually titillating sex life.

snegurochka_lee February 1 2010, 01:58:13 UTC

in which Remus wanders into the showers to have a wash and Lily's hanging from the curtain bar as James fucks her :D

a;lksjdflskjflskjf. ALSO, reverse cowgirl?!?!??! ;alksjdfa. And with the other dudes sitting in the room. OH MY GOD LILY AND JAMES YOU KINKY LITTLE FUCKERS ILUSM.

scabbyfish January 31 2010, 03:22:21 UTC

Wonderful <3 Made me laugh and tear up at the same time, heh.

gyzym February 3 2010, 17:02:39 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it :D