hawaii 5-0 fic: weight of days lost holding you down [steve/danny, pg]

[gyzym]

So, here are some things this story is: shameless shameless ridiculous shameless id fic; about 6500 words longer than it was supposed to be; part of the same 'verse as Curving Like the Ocean Toward You (though it can be read alone); entirely Cate and hermette's fault. Here are some things it is NOT: uh, claiming to be a work of genius /o

Comments

[gyzym]

PIRATES FOREVERRRRRRRRR

[papered]

oh, this is lovely. I still have not read any H5O fics other than this and the first one from you - I think it's partly the fact that I don't entirely ship steve and danny (yet? possibly), but you write them in a way that's believable and still PG, and they are just both so very very in-character.

“You do not,” Danny says, “that is such a lie, McGarrett, do not misrepresent yourself like that. He doesn’t go where he’s told. He has never once done what he was told, if I told him to breathe he’d probably hold his breath just to spite me and he’d probably be able to do it for a year, okay, without even breaking a sweat, he makes not doing what he’s told into an art form--”

♥

[gyzym]

Eee, I'm so glad you liked this! Thank you so much ♥

[madeitsimple]

oh my god, everything is pineapples and nothing hurts. <3333 wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

[gyzym]

Thank you so much!!

[photoclerk]

*___*
I... you need to have a warning just for me, I think. Something about "the affection you longed for as a child" or "oh hey Molly, ~emotions~"

Except not really. It's- well it's not *nice* exactly having that much longing kick you in the heart, but it's like... the spot that was empty fills up to overflowing in the blink of an eye. <3 I love your Danny so much it hurts Jizzy.
Thanks.

[gyzym]

♥ ♥ ♥ You deserve all the affection, bb. I am so glad you liked this.

[sheafrotherdon]

asdjhlkjfalskdjfh oh, oh, oh, oh the end of this made me tear up, no lie. Steve so sweet and careful with him, coaxing him to relax, and Danny soothed and loved and comfortable and jashdflkhasfd my HEART. It just cracks my heart, for the both of them, jsahdlfkjahlsdhfk *happy sigh*

And the rest! Oh, god, I love Danny and Rachel slipping in and out of old arguments, trying to find their footing in this new place, and Danny - Danny, the big goof, rationalizing that Rachel's the one who's scared, who's thinking of the hospital, of Grace small and sick, when it's his own enormous heart that's beating out of his chest with it.

asdjfhlkjadsf "Com on, you can do it, let go." MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP *_______________*

[gyzym]

DFDSFHDFDSFSD OH THANK GOD. I kept looking at this and being like, oh my god, this has gotten...so...wildly...out of hand....so I am thrilled that you liked it and, just, yes. HOORAY ETC, thank you so much for both the prompt and this comment ♥ ♥ ♥