White Collar Fic!

Mar 18, 2010 01:56

Dearest freaky_zeroYOU SENT ME AN AWESOME PROMPT ABOUT PETER AND EL FINDING STUFF MISSING FROM THEIR HOUSE, and I started to fill it, and then it turned into this 2,000+ words long thing and took me forever, I AM SORRY! But I finished it and then I could not find your comment to reply to. I do not know if you deleted it or if LJ did BUT HERE IS YOUR STORY. ( Read more... )

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asimaiyat March 18 2010, 06:18:05 UTC
<3 <3 <3

How is this so hot and dirty and also so utterly adorable? I don't even understand how that works!

For some reason the part where she says he isn't hard enough yet and he has to touch himself in front of them... that hit all kinds of kinks for me.

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gyzym March 18 2010, 17:02:30 UTC
:D

So glad you liked it! Least I could do after ALL THE AWESOME of yesterday!

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augustbird March 18 2010, 06:19:48 UTC
i don't think i like. breathed. while reading this.

this is like

AKSDJFKSHFSJKDFHLSD.

so fucking hot, i can't stand it THIS IS HOW ALL THREESOME FICS SHOULD BE WRITTEN KSJDHFJSD.

and this line
Peter pauses in his line of questioning to push Neal forward and please her.

THIS LINE.

THAT IS SO PETER.

also i want to quote other lines but my brain can't actually function right now thanks to this.

you're amazing <3333

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photoash March 18 2010, 06:25:18 UTC
Hot and sweet :D I really liked Neal yanking on his cock to get hard enough to fuck her -- that was scorching!! :)

I also liked the ending -- that Neal wanted to try sleeping at his place is so much AWWWW <3 :)

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shaney March 18 2010, 06:43:21 UTC
Hot, fun and adorable. Nnnnnnnggggghhhhhhh.

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iphignia939 March 18 2010, 06:50:01 UTC
...have I mentioned lately THAT I LOVE YOU? If not, I really should have. I've been remiss.

<333

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