Lovely - and yes this works for me too, making sense of the FOB and then what happens after, kind of like the way Eugene went. One typo though, "eber" for "ever".
I never really liked the "something's moving in the darkness" thing. Much preferred the way Eugene went, and I like the idea that if you're loved, you're never alone. But I'm a blubbering romantical type. And I've always wanted to use that lyric in something. LOL!
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I never really liked the "something's moving in the darkness" thing. Much preferred the way Eugene went, and I like the idea that if you're loved, you're never alone. But I'm a blubbering romantical type. And I've always wanted to use that lyric in something. LOL!
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Thanks for reading and commenting. (and for calling it gorgeous! LOL!)
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