Comments | gypsyflame: FIC: Give My Heart 5/5

gypsyflame

FIC: Give My Heart 5/5

Jul 01, 2010 08:32

Comments 56

Wow~! cynaga July 1 2010, 15:19:16 UTC

Talk about having your cake and eating it too. We got the HarryxDraco hot, rival, magical sex and the SnapexDraco romance too. I loved this one. Exciting and sexy and unique way to do a threesome... BRAVO!!!

Re: Wow~! gypsyflame July 4 2010, 15:32:52 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

HI sobriquet212 July 1 2010, 18:55:18 UTC

Hi I just wanted to say that I love your work! I finished this fic last week and resurrection yesterday so now I have read everything posted on your LJ lol. You really do have a gift for exposing the delicate nuances in their relationships, whether it be harry/draco, severus/draco or another pairing. Your characterization of Draco is perfect, absolutely perfect. Draco has always been my favorite character, but it wasn't until I started reading your fics that I fell in love. Please keep writing! Know that you work is much appreciated!

Re: HI gypsyflame July 4 2010, 15:38:09 UTC

Thank you so much! I really appreciate that. Draco is my favorite character, too (though I'm sure you've gathered that already), and I don't think there's any danger of me stopping writing about him any time soon. ;-) Thank you again for your lovely comment!

lullabylily July 4 2010, 20:42:47 UTC

I really enjoyed this story!! The sex scenes were absolutely hot, both in the H/D as S/D pairing. It was also an intriguing story with so much tension. All three characters had to deal with having the 'plot' messing thoroughly with their emotions. I'm usually a fan of the H/D though I've recently explored S/D pairing (wrote a fic but haven't posted in on LJ yet); they really are a lovely pairing. I loved the extra tension and angst on Snape's part of being afraid of being cast away in favour of another Potter. Poor jealous Snape :-). I loved how he felt so enormously guilty after hurting Draco sexually; it really showed the strain their relationship was under, and how it was spinning out of control. Lovely to see that all three characters still got a happy ending :-).

gypsyflame July 7 2010, 15:25:07 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I really must encourage you to post your fic ASAP! There's not enough Snaco in fandom. :-)

BTW, I love your icon! Adorable.

euphory July 5 2010, 07:33:32 UTC

omg, this is just so good. SO GOOD. It hits all my kinks with Snape/Draco and Harry/Draco.
Thank you for the wonderful writing.

gypsyflame July 7 2010, 15:26:06 UTC

Thank you very much! :-)

carolinelamb July 5 2010, 09:12:23 UTC

that was wonderful! i loved how you used that cliche - draco seduces harry - and made it so much more interesting.

i loved how you wrote about all the conflicting desires and i loved your brave childish severus!

gypsyflame July 7 2010, 15:20:37 UTC

Thank you so much for all your comments! I love following along with people's thoughts and reactions as they read through a long fic. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks again for all the lovely feedback! :-)