HOMG. ;alksjdflkdjsfds. Flawed!Harry!!!!! I love it! Did not see that coming, and oh oh, so awesome.
And Severus - he had watched the memory of Potter fucking Draco, and what had he done? Thrown him on his hands and knees and fucked him until he’d bled. He’d used Draco like an animal. Like a toy.
Like a whore.
*clutches chest* Dear god. I love this so much. I love how much the dynamics have so seamlessly shifted from the beginning of the story. Draco's right, and I love so much that we get to see him take charge of his own life here. Oh, so awesome. I have no idea how this will end!!! At the beginning I was thinking, oh, happy threesome! But now I'm thinking Draco will turf both of them and go off on his own. :D Either way (or a different route), I love all three of these characterisations so, so much. And the very idea of powerful!Harry continues to make me a complete mess.
Oh, and btw? “Stay down,” he ordered in a voice that rumbled with thunder. “Just take it.” -- has reduced me to a quivering puddle on the floor. ;alskjf.
Complete and utter triumph. I am practically speechless. The total twist in plot, Snape and Harry fighting and Draco's feelings of betrayal.... Plus, the way you describe him feeling Harry's magic pretty much makes my life. And how Harry exploited it, how YOU GAVE HIM a darker side but also clearly real emotions for Draco, was absolutely perfect, as was Hermione's appearance.
WOW!! I never think to Potter knew about Draco! This chapter was amazing! my favorite part is when Draco told them to go fuck themselfs, they really deserve that, he's not a toy!! For a moment I though to this is going to be a threesome but now I'm wondering if Draco is going to forgive Severus, but to me is clear to Potter don't love Draco, he desired him, wants to own him, but that's not love, is pure lust.
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i did love that harry had known about draco's weakness all along and exploited it.
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And Severus - he had watched the memory of Potter fucking Draco, and what had he done? Thrown him on his hands and knees and fucked him until he’d bled. He’d used Draco like an animal. Like a toy.
Like a whore.
*clutches chest* Dear god. I love this so much. I love how much the dynamics have so seamlessly shifted from the beginning of the story. Draco's right, and I love so much that we get to see him take charge of his own life here. Oh, so awesome. I have no idea how this will end!!! At the beginning I was thinking, oh, happy threesome! But now I'm thinking Draco will turf both of them and go off on his own. :D Either way (or a different route), I love all three of these characterisations so, so much. And the very idea of powerful!Harry continues to make me a complete mess.
Oh, and btw? “Stay down,” he ordered in a voice that rumbled with thunder. “Just take it.” -- has reduced me to a quivering puddle on the floor. ;alskjf.
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Me too. Squared. Cubed!
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Beautiful work, as always.
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“Stay down,” he ordered in a voice that rumbled with thunder. “Just take it.”
Effing D.E.D.
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This chapter was amazing! my favorite part is when Draco told them to go fuck themselfs, they really deserve that, he's not a toy!!
For a moment I though to this is going to be a threesome but now I'm wondering if Draco is going to forgive Severus, but to me is clear to Potter don't love Draco, he desired him, wants to own him, but that's not love, is pure lust.
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