i probably shouldn't comment on every chapter - but i can't resist. i love the relationship between severus and draco and draco and harry, and i like especially how you write draco.
Oh, gawd, that was so good that I simply clicked on to the next part instead of reviewing and had to come back. So:
That was... perfect. I'm not entirely sure why, but it was. Simple and hot and just all around amazing. Plus, I LOVED Draco's little thought about his mother. Great work!
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Oh, and I also laughed myself silly when Draco did the 'bend over' trick because I couldn't stop thinking about the bend and snap from Legally Blonde! Wow...
I wanted to comment before... but just couldn't stop clickingggg....
THIS chapter, their first kiss. Woah. That was incredibly sensual and erotic and twenty different kinds of HAWT. And then the second one! And and and....
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That was... perfect. I'm not entirely sure why, but it was. Simple and hot and just all around amazing. Plus, I LOVED Draco's little thought about his mother. Great work!
Midnight
Oh, and I also laughed myself silly when Draco did the 'bend over' trick because I couldn't stop thinking about the bend and snap from Legally Blonde! Wow...
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I wanted to comment before... but just couldn't stop clickingggg....
THIS chapter, their first kiss. Woah. That was incredibly sensual and erotic and twenty different kinds of HAWT. And then the second one! And and and....
Ooooh eee, I need a moment!
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