FIC: Give My Heart 2/5

[gypsyflame]

Comments

[carolinelamb]

incredibly erotic! and i adore how you write the transition of dracos feelings.

[snegurochka_lee]

a;lskdjf oh dear god, powerful!Harry is just about my favourite characterisation ever, and I love Draco's reaction to it here. Aaaaaah, so hot, I can't even. a;lksf. And don't think I didn't notice Draco's secret fantasy here at the end. La, very much hoping that plays out, because damn, I sure can't pick which one Draco should be with. Loving this so much. ♥

[teenage_hustler]

favourite part:
“How’d I do?” he asked.

“Quite well,” Draco said. “One could almost believe that you truly resent my presence here.”

Weasley grinned. “I had to dig deep.”

Christ I love Ron.

[midnight_noon92]

Aah, so good! I seriously LOVE Ron's little cameo, and the concept of tactile magic. Draco's NOT thinking about him and Severus being together forever made me want to cry, but it was so wonderful at the same time, especially with it ending in his panic attack and then, the newfound realization of 'Potter's Magic'! Brilliant ideas and brilliant author bring them to brilliant fruition!

[m_xanath]

I like the explanation of "tactile magic" must be incredible can feel that, especially the magic of Severus but at the same time is so frightening because Draco is surronded of magic, be in a battle must be really hard.
Draco is incorregible, "That's fine. I don't wear any" , just imagine Potter's face makes me laugh, I think Potter not only likes blonds in fact he is atracted to one blond, to Draco, who can blame him?
This chapter was great! incredibly erotic and full of information, now we know about the way Draco feel magic, the panic attacks (must be horrible have them) and we also know to Ron is not such a bad actor, LOL