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FIC: Forgiveness

May 06, 2010 11:50

Title: Forgiveness
Author: gypsyflame
Pairing: Lucius/Draco; Snape/Draco in background
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~2,750
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, et al. This was created for fun, not for profit.
Warnings: Incest; paddling; underage (Draco is 15/16); Draco’s messed-up headspace
Summary: Lucius punishes Draco after the ( Read more... )

lucius/draco, fic

Comments 31

les_lenne May 6 2010, 16:34:33 UTC

I really like how Lucius would rather put his son's abilities to good use in any way possible without having any desire to keep him safer than absolutely necessary. Poor Draco though.

Nice little fic!

gypsyflame May 7 2010, 17:13:26 UTC

Thank you! "Poor Draco" is a response I get to most of my fics, LOL. I really do abuse the poor guy.

socherokee May 6 2010, 20:17:00 UTC

Wow. That's really quite... I can't find the words. Lucius is so awful, in a way that hasn't been written a lot before. Or not in a way I have ever read anyway.
Great job :)

gypsyflame May 7 2010, 17:12:14 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

lolafalola May 6 2010, 20:43:39 UTC

I love Malfoycest. You're going to cross post here as well, yes? http://community.livejournal.com/malfoycest/

Great job... poor Draco, his father only thinks he's good at being a whore.

gypsyflame May 7 2010, 17:11:05 UTC

Thanks! I actually love it too, but it never occured to me to write it until "incest" came up as one of DD's prompts. I didn't even know that comm existed, but thanks for pointing me to it! :-)

kitschobrien May 6 2010, 21:40:47 UTC

I've been working on a Lucius/Draco fic, and I'm so glad someone else is writing it, too! It's one of my guilty pleasures, and you've reminded me why. This is so freaking hot. I swear your slutty!Draco is the best thing ever. I want to punch Lucius for whoring him out like that, but really, who can be surprised... Lucius is a prick. Thanks for writing this. It blew my mind and other such things.

*goes off to fap to the idea of Draco riding Snape all day*

gypsyflame May 7 2010, 17:10:04 UTC

Thank you! Slutty!Draco is my personal weakness. And I'm looking forward to reading your Lucius/Draco fic!

lokifan May 7 2010, 06:58:53 UTC

I got all excited when I saw you'd posted, and this was every bit as good as I hoped for. It was blazingly hot - spanking! Humiliation! Lucius questioning Draco while he fucks him - Ravenna C Tan has given me such a kink for that.

And so intriguing! Lucius knowing to pinch his nipples made me 0.0 And I'd love to see Snape's POV on this whole situation, especially since he's effectively aiding and abetting Lucius in hurting Draco.

And poor Draco, OMG! He wants Lucius' approval so much, he tries so hard to be a good boy. It's so sad, and fucking hot.

Also YAY LAST LINE.

gypsyflame May 7 2010, 17:08:20 UTC

LOL! I wrote that last line when I was only 25% through the beginning of the fic, and then wrote towards it - so I'm glad somebody besides me likes it. ;-)

Thanks for your kind words! I think you and I may have eerily similar tastes in Draco!porn. And of course I can never resist desperateforapproval!Draco - it's why he appeals to me so much as a character. *pets him*