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FIC: The Promotion

Sep 03, 2011 14:22

Title: The Promotion
Author: gypsyflame
Pairing: Snape/Draco/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,400
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, et al. This was created for fun, not for profit.
Warnings: D/s; humiliation; consensually-roleplayed dubious consent (say that three times fast)
Summary: Harry really needs that promotion. Draco is ( Read more... )

controlverse, ot3, fic

Comments 35

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gypsyflame September 23 2011, 22:32:00 UTC

Thank you so much! And welcome to LJ. If you friend me, all of my posts will show up on your friends page, so you won't have to go hunting around for updates. Glad to have you! :-)

lokifan October 20 2011, 13:33:03 UTC

Apparently failed to comment when I read this originally, but I love it to bits :) Especially Harry stripping Draco and showing him off to Snape! UNF. The moment when Draco lost it was really gorgeous.

Also, thank you for introducing to me to a new porn trope - I didn't know lecherous boss/scandalised wife was a thing, lol!

gypsyflame October 22 2011, 16:42:53 UTC

Hee! Thank you. I'm always glad to broaden people's porny horizons. In fact, I have a whole Word document full of porn cliches adapted to fit a gay D/s threesome, just waiting to be written. ;-)

lunanimes January 22 2012, 10:48:11 UTC

I don't usually comment, but after reading a couple of comments I had to, just to make sure you knew that this fic was wonderful and that it's great how they interacted with each other. My favorite part aside from the smut was when Draco sort of pointed out how they all balance each other, since Severus needs to dominate, Draco feels the need to submit, and Harry sometime needs to be dominated but not be submissive and to dominate too. It's like they are fitted for each other. Loved it. It is wonderful ( ... )

gypsyflame January 22 2012, 17:54:57 UTC

Thank you very much! I really love the Snarco dynamic of Snape as a dominant top, Draco as a submissive bottom, and Harry as a dominant switch, so I always tend to characterize them that way when I write the threesome. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And LOL at how many people didn't get that this was roleplay! That really threw me for a loop back when I first posted the story. Thanks so much for your kind words. :-)

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gypsyflame March 15 2012, 11:51:15 UTC

Thank you! :-)

lost_stray_cat May 1 2013, 04:26:27 UTC

I really love that Draco loves humiliation and objectification, and that it sends Harry into the stratosphere of arousal! :-) I gotta say it was delicious! I was puzzled at first because you wrote it not as a play but as if Draco really didn't know what is going on. But even so, I loved seeing Draco squirm helplessly when faced with dominating Snape.