Fic: Ghosts 1/? [PotC, Sparrabeth, PG-13]

[gylzgirl]

Title: Ghosts 1/?
Author: GylzGirl
Rating: PG-13 for now
Fandom: PotC
Pairing: Sparrabeth
Continuity: This fic is a sequel to Fate IntervenesSummary: After leaving Libertalia, Jack and Elizabeth Sparrow once again take to sailing the seas on the Black Pearl; but raw emotions, rough seas and the past seek to test their happily ever after

Comments

[desiring_me]

Oh! That was wonderful!! Don't take too long with the second chapter- very good start for a sequel. *claps*

[gylzgirl]

My plan, knock wood, is that I will release the chapters on a regular basis, but not try to hold myself to the weekly chapter that I attempted with FI (which I managed for awhile and then couldn't keep up with). I think this one will be somewhat shorter than FI, but I've allowed for Jack and Liz to surprise me there. They did last time and it seemed to work for everybody :) Thank you for the feedback!

[savvysparrowluv]

Absolutely. Beautiful. Stunning imagery, you wrote the characters so well (as you always do) - I could relate so much to Lizzie sorrow, you could feel it in your heart. Can't wait for another chapter, wonderful start to an even more wonderful sequel. Brightened my rainy morning! :D

[gylzgirl]

Thank you luv. You guys encourage me so!

[lunafox]

[gylzgirl]

Thank you. Hopefully, I'll surprise you a time or two more before this ends :)

[gylzgirl]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

[ventoux15]

Amazing. I loved Fate Intervenes,so wonderfully written and so IC. This chapter was absolutely wonderful, again, well-written and IC. I actually cried, I felt so sorry for Jack and Elizabeth, I hope they figure things out and will be able to help each other through the loss.
Loved your first story, love this chapter, love your writing,(you should have written AWE IMHO)Looking very much forward to the next update.

[gylzgirl]

Thank you so much. I'm all blushy now :)