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Fic: Fate Intervenes 8/16 [PotC Fandom]

Sep 19, 2006 01:03

Title: Fate Intervenes 8/16
by GylzGirl
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sparrabeth. Spoilers for DMC.
Summary: Elizabeth is in trouble and it seems Jack, and something he asked her a long time ago, are her only hope.
Other headers attached to chapter one.
EXTREME THANKS to my beta Karen for all her help on this one.
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( CHAPTER EIGHT: What Happens in La Vega, Stays in La Vega )

fic, potc, fate intervenes, sparrabeth

Comments 48

lawyergirl15 September 19 2006, 01:23:14 UTC

Yay! I was wondering when you would update next. I can absolutely see Elizabeth getting an education to use on Jack. Great chapter!

gylzgirl September 21 2006, 04:44:21 UTC

I know, I was very naughty and late. Still, my car is very clean now. But that's no excuse. You must send Jack to punish me and I'll just have to accept that :)

Thanks for the feedback luv!

fsugiselle September 19 2006, 01:35:21 UTC

Another fantastic chapter of a great fic! I'm so glad you posted this today - it made a great birthday present. :o)

gylzgirl September 21 2006, 04:45:16 UTC

Happy belated birthday! I'm very happy if it added any smiles to your special day! Thank you!

gonekrazy3000 September 19 2006, 01:39:05 UTC

That.... was.... Frikkin.... Amazing!!!!
This story is definately amongst my favorites (though it has been for the last few chapters). I loved this chapter though i must admit the title for the next one scares me a little. I truely hope it has more to do with the bad guy (can't remember his name atm) and not with Jack or Elizabeth cheating on each other so soon..... (Though by their marriage vows it wouldn't constitue as cheating if they slept with someone else....)

gylzgirl September 21 2006, 04:46:03 UTC

Thank you :) Next chapter is up now, so go find out :D

monkeyscorpion September 19 2006, 01:51:26 UTC

Is it warm in here?

Loved this line, and I don't know why:

She touched his cheek. "You're being very sweet, even if somewhat annoying. But I'm afraid I must insist."

[but it could be that i'm over-dosing on Charmed, and keep hearing Piper instead of Lizzie with that line...or i'm insane. take your pick]

gylzgirl September 21 2006, 04:47:00 UTC

Hey, Piper rules. I'm glad you're still with me. Thanks for continuing to feedback!

gott1172 September 19 2006, 02:24:20 UTC

Another HOT chapter. I really enjoyed the idea of Lizzie so wanting to learn to please Jack, that she approaches a prostitute for instruction.

I can't wait for the next installment (although the title is giving me pause).

gylzgirl September 21 2006, 04:47:34 UTC

Thanks! Next chapter is up now. Hope you like it!