Comments | gylzgirl: Fic: Fate Intervenes 1/16 [PotC Fandom]

gylzgirl

Fic: Fate Intervenes 1/16 [PotC Fandom]

Jul 31, 2006 17:46

Spoilers for DMC. Takes place sometime after the third movie.

Title: Fate Intervenes 1/16
by GylzGirl
Rating: So far, suggestive PG-13. Will be NC-17.
Warnings: Sparrabeth. Spoilers for DMC.
Summary: Elizabeth is in trouble and it seems Jack, and something he asked her a long time ago, are her only hope.

( CHAPTER ONE: The Proposal )

fic, potc, fate intervenes, sparrabeth

Comments 49

kyra_neko_rei July 31 2006, 18:33:56 UTC

"If I were agree to this tempting offer… I would expect an actual, consummated union. I mean, there'd be little in it for me without that… stipulation."

"I have no objection to that," she said quietly.

You teased us with this line around a week ago. Where? I remember reading it to advertise a forthcoming fic, somewhere.

gylzgirl July 31 2006, 20:13:09 UTC

Not guilty I'm afraid.

kyra_neko_rei July 31 2006, 23:59:35 UTC

*is confused*

All right, that makes no sense at all. I remember that very dialogue, and got an intense feeling of deja vu when I read it now---I'd read it before, I'm sure of it.

So if you didn't put it anywhere . . . *is freaked*

Thing is, I can't remember where. Like I dreamed it?

*like your icon, feels sullied and unusual*

OK.

gylzgirl August 1 2006, 00:38:26 UTC

Very weird indeed :) But I didn't write that line until yesterday afternoon. And it was codicil for a very long time until I looked that up and found out that codicil is primarily specific to wills so then I changed it to stipulation.

*eyes you suspiciously* Come to think of it now, you do look a little bit like Tia Dalma. Get out of my brain! :)

piratemistress July 31 2006, 18:44:24 UTC

This was SOOOOO incredibly good. One of the best post-DMC fics I've read. You've got the characters down, and the humor... their pride.. poor Will! But you wrote that letter how he sounds, too, I could hear all of their voices. Please continue ASAP... I can't wait to see this bath :-)

gylzgirl August 12 2006, 09:47:51 UTC

Thank you very much :)

social_siren July 31 2006, 18:47:44 UTC

Steamy...I can't wait to read more.

gylzgirl August 12 2006, 09:48:51 UTC

I'm so happy you liked it. Chapter Two is up now. Chapter Three hopefully this weekend.

orchidblossoms July 31 2006, 18:55:16 UTC

The Rum analogy used by Jack reminded me of that delightful "Waffle" stuff Mr. Elliot gave us. hahaha, very nice - very Jack

"Ye want me bathed, Lizzie, you'll do the job yourself. And then I'll return the favor, savvy?" Grrowwl. yum. >D

All in all, I loved it! Please continue soon!

gylzgirl August 12 2006, 09:49:38 UTC

I hadn't thought of the rum thing being like the waffle thing, but I love that it made you think of it :)

Amazing... steffygirl July 31 2006, 19:13:35 UTC

I think this was an amazing first chapter...I cannot wait to read the rest of the story! Hope you post it soon!!

Re: Amazing... gylzgirl August 12 2006, 09:50:46 UTC

Chapter Two got posted last weekend. There should be more soon. I'm so happy you like it!