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[cannedebonbon]

For: sarahofcroydon
From: cannedebonbon
Request: Phoenix/Edgeworth; A sexy 19th century AU full of horses and fine estates and intrigue and homophobia and wet white shirts.
Spoilers?/Rating: Nothing; PG...16? I really don't know how to rate these things. >:|
Comments: I was originally going to colour them, but then realized I probably won't have enough time. I hope the flow

Comments

[xtwilightzx]

.. oh my goodness, frills everywhere and HORSES and making out in the barn, and why do you have such attention to detail?! (pitch fork in the haystack? woo) and Franziska is awesomeness times a million in a frilly dress (whip in one hand, fan in the other!) and the ending HAHAHA I need to stop writing comments when I'm sleep deprived and insomnia-ed. I'll give you better comments tomorrow, promise.

*chants* overachiever-overachiever-overachiever but GODS we love you for it.

[cannedebonbon]

Now that I'm looking over it again after being a bit more awake, THE GLARING INCONSISTENCIES.... THEY BURN ME. *makes a mental note to correct them once she gets home*

Details makes a picture more realistic to look at? I don't know. I would put in more stuff if I know enough about the Victorian era without screwing things up. (I had such a big debate about Adrian's glasses)

Your insomnia problem seems really serious... Have you ever tried the good old fashioned warm cup of milk?

Not. An. Overachiever. It's only 8 tiny little pictures, with no colours even. D:

[xtwilightzx]

What glaring inconsistencies? We don't see it! Okay, a more lucid response this time. You know your details is want makes your art so good, right? Like Franziska's dress and man, I really love that barn (and not just because there are gay lawyers men making out etc in it). Mmm, I think Adrian's glasses are okay - the von Karmas are very good to their staff?

This reads like a short, dialogue-less doujin! (and that's sort of what we mean by psychic space =D letting the audience fill in the blanks).

... only eight pictures? Only? And they are so not little, woman. You know, the pics look like photographs and although photography back then was a slow, torturous waiting process, I can't help the train of thought this is taking me XDDDD

I think my system's all wonky from being sick + midterm, so I hope it resolves itself now. I should try the milk, maybe...

[cannedebonbon]

Franziska's dress and fan look different from frame to frame, not to mention Edgeworth's magical length-varying breeches. Do they even have glasses like that back in those days? I know there's probably spetacles (since microscope was invented already, they must know about optical lens), but glasses with modern designs like those??

That was my goal? Yeah for success! (Aha! So that's what you meant.)

They are tiny. Only one quarter of a normal letter sized paper. So what's really 8 pictures is just two sheets of letter sized paper. >____>;;

Miiiiiiilllllllk! <3 My favourite beverage of choice.

[nekocrouton]

Wow, this is awesomeness, hilarity and sexiness all rolled up in a neat package!! <3

And the last panel cracks me up to no end. XD

Fabulous job. <3

[cannedebonbon]

...People seem to like my messy, cop-out, totally chibi and no effort ending. *thinks*

Well, as long as I'm not getting brick'd for it. XD;;

[amethystium]

This is sooo awesome! I especially like how you applied shadows, it fits the prompt so well! ❤

[cannedebonbon]

=D Thank you. The shading took quite a while esepcially with all that smudging going on.

[strawberrykaoru]

Ha, and you ask me "what kind of rating is PG-14?" :P

WOO, I'm the only one without a PW icon so far. *GRIN*

[cannedebonbon]

I thought you're supposed to be WORKING in the library.

Then, pray tell, what kind of rating do you think I should give this thing?

[strawberrykaoru]

I am. ...sort of. XD

"R". LOL.

[dark_viaticum]

I like the sparkles in the third panel. XD Excellent. But this is quite good, poopoo, especially the ending. Classic. And I've always really liked sketchy stuff. <3

[cannedebonbon]

The sparkles would be pink if I ever colour the pictures. = =+

Really, what's so appealing about the ending? Everybody seems to like it. Je ne comprend pas! (Ahaha, my horrible attempt at French. Look at me faaaaail.)

[dark_viaticum]

Hehe. The ending's funny, a classic, and your French is correct. I think everyone just enjoys watching boys get beat up. =)