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[gwynraven]

So here's the first of the poems I'm to write for the poetry spiral of my druidry studies. Of course it will be depressing -- I rarely write anything else. And it's the first thing I have written in about 2 years, so it's a little awkward. That said, I'm actually pretty happy with it.

Loneliness is like a swamp

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[bookgirlwa]

Loneliness is like a swamp
And like the swamp
It has a beauty of its own.

I really liked these lines, and very much agree with them.

[gwynraven]

Thanks :)

[harkalark]

Not bad...

Have I mentioned lately that I miss you?

[queenbookwench]

That's quite lovely, with some evocative images. Free verse is a good look for you. :)