Title: Yamada's Complex
Author: macy
Pairing: NEW!YamadaxMorimoto; implied YamaShi, RyuuNon, etc.
Genre: Fluff, Romance
Rating: G
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-unbetaed, written while desperately fighting off writing block, so i'm not quite sure about this. /shot
-Warning: excessive use of parenthesis (Yuta has many comments. lol
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teenage is teenage desu ne~
*well, honestly I've never felt like that, so.. /shot*
so fluffy~ :3
and well, I think Yuta got his 'complex mind' from his dad~ *whacked*
hisashiburi, Macy-san! ^^
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hahaha. they have issues. lols.
me too, actually. books help me write. :))
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definitely. lols.
hay. arigatou! tadaima. :D
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I'm feeling all fluffy and giddy... it was so sweet~:)
When Yuta was with Kaori (when she and her boyfriend broke up) and he started "confessing", I was like, 'this is kid is smooth~' BUT then *bam* he just went to teasing her again, it was mind torture! I wanted to push him towards her and make him confess already!
well, good thing he didn't do it right there, cause the ending was really *squeals* much better! I love it a lot~
Such a complex mind, yet I'm loving it lots. lol
:)
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haha. thanks.
i was actually just writing as i think and i was thinking of just ending it there but my random mind told me to keep writing more. XD
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thanks so much for reading and commenting~:DD
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I must thank your random mind for telling you to keep writing coz the ending where Yuta said "I Love You" was perfect...
it might have been too cheesy if you didn't know their history but since we were stalking them from chibi days to when they were the right age, it was just pure "rabbu rabbu"~
Oh~ I can't love it less~
:D
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yeah, that's why i needed to use OCs instead of my usual pairings. the history was crucial for the story. :)
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this is.....this is....this is toooo much!!!!
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i'm glad you like it!! :DD
♥♥♥ =))
thank you! X3
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I can't help but to imagine them as their parents carbon copy :)
Well, this is cute, imagining Yamashi's son and Ryuunon's daughter to fall in love :)
Thanks for this Author-san :)
I'll wait for your future fics :)
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yeah, pretty much how i imagined them too. xD
i have this weird love for childhood sweethearts story so i can come up with cheesy plots like this. /shot i actually also made a fic about ohgojima daughter and the other yamashi son. :))
you're very welcome! and thank you for reading~♥
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