Meant for Something Bigger - Star Trek 2009 fic

[gwenn_b]

Title: Meant for Something Bigger
Summary: In Spock’s original timeline, James Tiberius Kirk had been a great man - but that had been another life. Spock Prime reflects on the two Kirks he’s known.
Word Count: 645
Date: May 25th, 2009
A/N: My first Star Trek fic - YAY! Also, English is not my native language and this is not beta-ed, so feel free to

Comments

[tigriswolf]

Lovely.

[gwenn_b]

Thanks!

[blcwriter]

Just so ... Spock. And heart-warming. And in tune with where I think this AU Trekverse could go.

[gwenn_b]

I'm glad you liked!

[sabaceanbabe]

This is very well done. I love the parallels you draw, through Spock, between original Kirk and new Kirk. This new Kirk has obstacles in his path that the original never had to face and they've made him a very different man and I love that original Spock is there to watch him grow.

As for your English, it's very good. I only saw a couple of things: wander should be wonder, with an 'o' and the "attack to the USS Kelvin" should be the "attack on the USS Kelvin."

[gwenn_b]

Thank you for your help! =)

[teddy_tips]

Gave me goosebumps. Lovely.

[gwenn_b]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[kitkatken]

really liked your take on the 'new' Kirk I thought you got to the heart of him. well done!

[gwenn_b]

Glad you enjoyed, thank you!