Faux Vacuity - Fanfic

Sep 11, 2008 10:50


Fandom: Firefly
Title: Faux Vacuity
Date: August 28th, 2008
Word Count: 1,230
Summary: Jayne knows big words, and River knows that. They finally reach an understanding. To the rest of the crew though, it’s just crazy-talk.
Rated: PG - Jayne curses a bit.
Warnings: Post BDM, also some mention of Ariel. Pre-Rayne.
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little_dumpling September 11 2008, 15:35:57 UTC
hehe! i love this so much! it is adorable! and i have always had the opinion that jayne was smarter than he let on, so nice one on that! i would love to see more rayne from you in the future! so i'll be keeping an eye out!

p.s. just one thing, you wrote:
River smirked grew. "And you are an ape."
But did you mean?:
River's smirk grew. "And you are an ape."

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gwenn_b September 11 2008, 17:55:43 UTC
Yep, exactly what I meant. Fixed already, thank you for pointing it out!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I'm still finding my way around this fandom, but I have no intention to stop any time soon!
=)

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bookaddict43 September 11 2008, 20:58:52 UTC
*grins* I like that River and Jayne were the only ones who understood what she said. I also like the explanation for Jaynes coninued survival and his thoughts about Mal missing the obvious!

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gwenn_b September 12 2008, 01:44:16 UTC
Glad you liked!
Mal *does* tend to be a tad oblivious sometimes, doesn't he?
lol!

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an_ardent_rain September 11 2008, 23:23:41 UTC
Ooh, that was nice! I love smart!Jayne. Like he said in the series, if he'd wanted schooling, he'd have gone to school. I totally agree that he hides intelligence behind the "big, bad mercenary" exterior, so this was an awesome piece.

Good job; I enjoyed reading it.

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gwenn_b September 12 2008, 01:45:39 UTC
Thank you! *blushes*
smart!Jayne is love, isn't it?
=)

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cailet_06 September 12 2008, 00:50:39 UTC
I love how you characterize Jayne. I agree that he is most likely a lot smarter then he lets on.

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gwenn_b September 12 2008, 01:46:37 UTC
I like to think that Jayne is not really that stupid, lol!

Thanks for reading!
=)

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idyllictorture September 13 2008, 07:52:45 UTC
I enjoyed this and the title of the fic is awesome.

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gwenn_b September 13 2008, 13:45:06 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked!
=)

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