Except for the first sentence, I think it's perfect. I'd just delete that one sentence and get right to it. The sentiment you are shooting for comes across perfectly and it's a lovely thought and note.
It's heartfelt. The sentiment is fully there. Send it. Then hug everyone in your family again (either in person or virtually). What a terrible awful thing.
I vote for sending it. Words never seem like enough but they are something, and a good method for reaching out. It's the reaching, behind the words, that means a lot.
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What a horrible thing.
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God. I can't even imagine.
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What a horrible loss.
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