(FIC) We Pause To Begin: Chapter 4B

[maria_chan]

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[akiras_shadow]

I loved this! It really did meet all of my expectations for your work. I especially enjoyed Gunter's hints and poor Gwendal's obliviousness. lol I am sure that will change eventually. I also really like the way you show Gunter really does have a brain. Many writers, myself sometimes among them, tend to only show the ditzy side of someone who is truly a very multifaceted character. That goes for Gwendal too. Yeah he frowns, does paper work, and knits, but he is also a soldier, one of the ten nobles and is in charge of a spy network. I like that your story gives these guys the chance to stand up and show us other little pieces of themselves that we don't often get to see. Thank you for that and please keep up the good work. It is such a joy to read. :D

[maria_chan]

Aww thank you so much, I am really really really glad that you liked this chapter! I think I read your comment over and over because it made my blush so hard :). Yay for rising to expectations

[akiras_shadow]

Again, I think you have a very good grasp of these two. You have definitely put a lot of thought into this and I think that is wonderful. I look forward to the next chapter. :)

[maria_chan]

^^' thank you ♥

[ellaahn]

Amazing story!

[maria_chan]

Thannnnnk you :D ♥

[altena_san]

Beautifully written and well thought out. I can't wait for the next part!