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The Lies We Tell (14/15)

Dec 15, 2010 23:51

Title: The Lies We Tell (14/15)
Pairing: gen, possible C/G
Rating: K+
Disclaimer: LtM not mine. Donnell is property of David E Kelley (DEK).
Summary: When Zoe brings a new case and a new partner to the Lightman Group, long-buried truths will be revealed as they work to defend an innocent man, while a side investigation could also place one ( Read more... )

the lies we tell, cal/gill

Comments 16

aleia_jade December 16 2010, 05:29:46 UTC

I HAVE THINGS TO DO FOR TOMORROW BUT I'M READING THIS INSTEAD BECAUSE HELLO, GILLIAN FOSTER>>>SLEEPING. I LOVE/HATE YOU. Also I need to go do things now, but I wanted to stick this here anyway. I'll probably be back in a few days.

BEAUTIFUL HANDS. HANDS. HANDS.

OH GOOD IVANA WILL BE OKAY. PEOPLE WITH NO TONGUES USUALLY AREN'T.

Of COURSE he wants to go to Le Fort's. OF COURSE. It's disturbing how drawn to crazy he is.

/she doubted anyone would listen to her anyway/ Oh honey

awwwww Emily. You win, G, you win so hard for making such a sweet Emily.

"I met her once at a conference. She's pretty brilliant. One time, she punched me in the face. It was awesome." RECOGNIZE.

doppleganger!Foster

HELEN GAMBLE! I love her.

lollll None of them are proper.

"Just get over yourself." LINDSAY I LOVE YOU.

Awwwww Lindsay and Foster.

Gillian giving Torres ~professional development~? YES. And also a guilt trip? YES.

He dug his own hole. Let him get out on his own. Hurrah. Also, heartbreak.

gwassh0ppa December 16 2010, 15:59:11 UTC

WELL HELLO THERE. MISSED THIS.

YES. I KEPT THE BEAUTIFUL HANDS INTACT. IVANA?...

He'd go to Le Forts just like he'd willingly LET JENKINS BUDDY hunt down Foster. Cal is not a good human sometimes.

RE: Emily. I feel like that kid is the most human out of the lot of them, she seems to have a decent head on her shoulders and would be fine with bringing the heart and sincerity.

Lindsay may be a lil OOC in this, but I figure her to be the more outspoken/brazen of the two.

Heh, you think that's heartbreak. JUST YOU WAIT.

latitude24 December 16 2010, 05:42:57 UTC

Not too disjointed! The events were crazy, so the narrative made perfect sense. So happy that you're back! Please continue!

gwassh0ppa December 16 2010, 16:29:56 UTC

Excellent. It was crazy, wasn't it? Good times.

I'll keep going. Just be patient :) THANK YOU!

crumpled_up December 16 2010, 06:59:44 UTC

Well hello there! Glad to see you back. I hope your life has calmed down somewhat (although with the holidays around the corner, I don't blame you if it's gone insane) and been treating you well ( ... )

gwassh0ppa December 16 2010, 16:41:11 UTC

HIIIIII. Yes, life is insane. I'm doing what I can with minimal inspiration. TOUGH.

I'm glad the flow worked, I struggled with that. Emily and Torres. Yes. I want at least some of them to have a conscience. And honestly? Who'd really be able to get Cal out other than himself? Foster. AND SHE AIN"T BUDGING. for the time being, at least.

Between you me and this comment, there will be an epilogue. BUT DON"T WORRY. I've gotten you this far, there is hope. THANK YOU FRIEND!!!

tinlizzie82 December 16 2010, 15:25:05 UTC

I was really trying to wait until you finished this but I broke down and read it because ... well, I just had to. And wow ... just wow. You get it just right and it doesn't seem disjointed, or at least not any more disjointed than it would be in real life after the harrowing circumstances.

Anyway, I can't wait for you to wrap it up, especially since it will be the psychological fallout and that is one of the things I think you do best.

gwassh0ppa December 16 2010, 16:43:18 UTC

Woot woot :) Disjointed, but not too much. I LIKE IT.

Glad you're enjoying it. FALLOUT. IT's FUN. I LOVE IT. THANKS FOR BREAKING DOWN AND READING :)

sassycop December 16 2010, 16:57:58 UTC

OMG! I love this! But- I have some questions... Is Le Fort dead? Did Gillian shoot him? Or did the fire kill him? Where did the bruises on her arms come from-Le Fort or whoever pulled her out of the fire?? Forgive me-I'm obsessive about these details-and I guess they aren't really relevant overall. But, I can't help myself ( ... )

gwassh0ppa December 16 2010, 22:52:20 UTC

OMG! I bet you do :) Is Le Fort dead? Gee. That's a great question. Bruises? We can call that wear and tear from Le Fort's captivity. Perhaps the answers to all of this has already been written and it's in the next chapter... maybe :)

Henri v Gillian v Cal, it'll be quite fun. just youuuuu wait. Cal can do a couple things right, don't worry.

THANK YOU. All in due time my friend, all in due time :)